| Reviews for The Dance |
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llazo4108824 chapter 2 . 11/21/2015 I like this fanfic and you should make more chapters of this fanfic. |
llazo4108824 chapter 3 . 9/23/2015 I love this fanfic and you should make more chapters of this fanfic pleases. |
Silvereye-BW chapter 3 . 10/31/2013 Interesting story, hope you update soon. Arnold is kinda of a asshole in this story, and Helga just seems pure rageful now... This should get good. |
Nep2uune chapter 3 . 9/4/2013 I can't believe Helga isn't doing her own laundry anyway. Bob is always worried about the image of the family. But, I'm sure the whole town knows his wife is a drunk. And his youngest daughter is raising herself. Helga should of stop depending on them a long time ago. Just my opinion. Please update when you can. |
StrangerWays chapter 3 . 9/3/2013 How come every time I read th |
DannySamLover20 chapter 3 . 9/3/2013 nice! keep going! |
Best friends chapter 2 . 2/3/2013 Chapter 1. Well it been when me and phoebe had an idea to NOT be friends since I read her diary about the mean stuff she wrote. I mean it was true I treat her like crap. Then Arnold comes and talk and feels bad for me I said : LISTEN FOOTBALL HEAD I MUST PAY WANT I'VE DONE TO PHOEBE SO BUG OFF!. Arnold says: sorry Helga but I really feel bad that phoebe was your friend for like school years and in high school your done. Well bucko, you have to be loyal to your friend and I didn't do that to phoebe. The next day I went to the park to freshen myself up. Then I hear a voice it was was with Gerald on a date to the park. They where feeding bread to the gooses. Ha! I don't need phoebe I can make friends like a snap.I couldn't see phoebe's face so I got the heck out of there for them to have there stupid date how I hated it so much. Chapter 2 more tomorrow |
DannySamLover20 chapter 2 . 10/17/2012 wow! keep going! |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/8/2012 um hello where's the rest of the story? your just going to leave it where arnold and lila are dating and helga is becoming so depressed she's about to end it. man not a good ending |
hydeandjackieforever20 chapter 2 . 9/1/2012 please update soon. Interesting story,,, |
Zyah chapter 2 . 8/30/2012 I like the story, it's so strong and emotional. :) I hope you update soon ;) |
Nep2uune chapter 2 . 8/28/2012 Can I be in you story so I can kick Arnold's butt. He is getting on my nerve. He don't know what he wants. Please let Helga finds that special someone she was praying for. And PLEASE make it anyone but Arnold. How did Arnold get to school before Helga? Why is it that Arnold never get in trouble like she does? I don't know what grade they are in but Helga needs to get away from everyone. Maybe she wouldn't have to hide the nice Helga and could be happy. Please update when you can. |
StrangerWays chapter 2 . 8/28/2012 Honestly your story is pissing me off, only because you write Helga so well. She needs help! Like super bad. I'm angry that Arnold decides that randomly he wants Helga again after ignoring her like she was nothing, and then he expects her to just speak to him. Terrible. I really want Helga to reflect on herself and change for the better. She needs to be single so she can learn about herself or she needs someone new to understand her and help her change. This is making me so mad because its really realistic if Helga was the same old bully. God she needs help, like damn I've never been so angry. Lmao |
Evatarida chapter 2 . 8/28/2012 I love this. But a bit confusing also following what Arnold's do.. I mean, broke up with Helga on their anniversary, dated Lila while ignoring Helga, then broke up with Lila on their anniversary, then put interest again on Helga... I can't wait for the next chapter :) |
anonymousfanfictiongeek chapter 2 . 8/27/2012 Poor Helga she sure has a f*cked up life.. Although I must say I'm not a fan of Arnold, what a ass . BUT that doesn't metter, I keep reading xd |