Ooooh. I like the intensity of this chapter. And I love how you thought up some changes in Jonathan, like how Jace's hair and eyes got darker.

Write more. My feelings are crushed. Please, please write more.

OH DANG LILI
OH DANG
I ACTUALLY HAVE NO IDEA WHAT'S GOING ON BECAUSE I HAVE NO CONCEPT OF CONTEXT AND I HAVEN'T READ THE BOOKS
HOWEVER
"OH DANG" NONETHELESS

Love the story! Please update soon!

OMG!...

Omg clary!

So good! Please write more! I need to know what happens!

This is great! I hope you continue, since the Mortal Instruments fandom is in great need of well written fanfiction.

Well if you plan to make this story for 50 chapters... I think you should update one chapter per one day
Geez... How many times Sebastian must die... It Just never enough to kill him.. In ordinary ways

This is good so far! Can't wait for more! Update soon please! :D

Loved it,

Talk about a nail bitter you are the, edge of your seat and it's just the beginning bravo love it

Oh, I wasn't expecting this story to be anything spectacular at first, but once I started reading I was hooked! I've never seen this idea done anywhere else, and while the topic could be challenging to write, you did it exceptionally. I also enjoy how you wrote Sebastian's character, you didn't just take descriptions straight from the book. Please update soon!

This is really good. I hope you'll update soon!

This story is good. Update ASAP