Seriously I am crying as I write this. It was bloody brilliant. And so incredibly tragic. Porcelainangel.

Wow! One of the best I've ever read. Very moving!

Hey Alan its Cindy here, a wonderfully sad , tender, and explicit story. Full of heartbreak and sweet tenderness, full of memory, full of longing. You captured it all well and i know your a great writer-Dont deny it!

Keep Smiling

Cindy

That was a really great interpretation of what the Lisbon sisters did that night. Thanks. )

This is great. I always loved this part of the movie/book, and you captured it, and the unseen moments, perfectly. Very, very well written.

I really enjoyed this. It seems like this is what Jeffrey Eugenides would have written, had he gone in to detail about the suicides.

this story is tight but u must add more

that was hot i really liked how u explained everything... awesome

Wow. This is a great scenario. I'll admit, I never really thought about this part of the story... An interesting read.

I think you did a great job in filling in what wasn't in the movie...i liked it.

i haven't seen the movie yet, but for what your story has tolden me, i think it's pretty sad but quite real.

keep it real...

D.B

I'm crying! How sad!

Great story I think you did good w/ filling in ALL the empty scenes in the movie! GREAT job.

That was sooo sad you have to right more *sob* I've seen the film and read the book and its just so sad, but your version was worse (in sadness)!