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Wow is all I can say. I’ve been totally enraptured in this story for the past three days, reading this story. At first, I wasn’t sure what to think about it, I wasn’t sure what to think of Eva...but she grew on me and I think I like that there are so obviously parts of her that are so real, and I couldn’t say I wouldn’t have made some of the same choices she did. Truly, this is a wonderful story and I’m so happy there is a sequel. Congratulate yourself on a job well done and completing a beautiful story :)

What a marvelous story. My dear, I like your style.

Beautiful.

Hi there. After hours of hours of searching for a well written story; I have found yours. I was just really setling in when I see you used the "Lords" name as a swearing vocabulary. I am not vilifying you just trying to help; there are so many other swearing words to use. Otherwise great story.

She is a bit Mary sue
I mean, look, blonde curly hair blue eyes, knows several languages, knows how to dance, perfect body, loki falls for her instantly but other than that it is really good

Pretty dumb thing to do

I have to say I'm not surprised

Does Eva have an uncle that is John's brother but is actually his best friend by the name of Sherlock perhaps?

OH FUCK OH FUCK

I don't know why but that was just so sad. :'(

AH FUCK OMG

Oh my gosh that was wonderful!

Bravo! Thank you so much for gifting us with a sequel, LightningRapunzel. I know how much work and devotion it takes to write fiction, so I promise to review as often as I can.

Fantastic story-great character development! Can't wait for the sequel.