cute ending :D

damn i was hoping for a bigger bitch slap to Lianne then that...

fucking finally!

seriously? the bus driver's family, that what she comes up with?

C.O.D. would not have been blood loss it would have been G.S.W. to the head... you should also think abut adding a page break for scene changes.

and thinking about when they broke into the manning house didnt jump start her suspicions? and why is veronica acting so lost? she has been with the FBI for years now and has investigated loved ones murders before. I get that her name being attched would make it even more personal but she has experience with that too from the bus crash when she initially thought that the crash was her fault...

if it takes them more then a chapter to figure out who it is ill be disappointed seeing as he gave himself away big time with the god reference.

, really? dude is fucked up and it is really his own fault that he doesnt get to see his grandchild, and he was going to send her to an adoption agency anyways! but noooo now he's gonna ruin a federal case just for some petty vengeance.

Absolutely fantastic! Loved every minute of it. Great characterizations. :)

Good chapter.

Oooh very nice last chapter! I'm sad that it's over but I'm excited for what you'll write next! Please write more DoVe in the future! Also the last line of the story was great! :)

Love it! Just started reading it! Can't wait for you to contnue, so we can find out what is going on with Manning!

Love love it. Lianne really needs to go on somewhere. Don't care for her at all. Love the Celeste and Veronica moment.

Even though it was short I enjoyed this chapter! I hope you update again soon!

Great chapter! I loved seeing Don protective of Veronica when she was unconscious! :D ugh there needs to be more DoVe stories! :D