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Love this story...so well written...love love love...

Omg...soooooo sweet and sad...angst if I ever read it...well done...

Nice work!

wow, this is so sad, but really good please do another fanfic soon

I loved this , sad but great writing.

I love how you ended it on a happier note with 'Zest'. Keep up thewriting and hope o seemore Anne/Charles from you!

nice fanfiction,

wow, really good updates, your descriptive writting is relly impressve, there is a huge sense of foreboding, you can tell something sad is gunna happen, very angsty but really good keep up up and update soon ;)

good work, it looks like it's gonna have a sad ending

plz update and good luck on your exams :D

Aww this seems like it will end badly. Poor Charles and Anne. Great chapter cant wait for the ending.

I reallywanted a happy ending for those two but I guess it's not gonna happe :( but this is still great work!

it's good, i like cruelty, and mother best

this is really good, you're very good at describing things, i rlly liked jealously, on chapter 2 and france on chapter 1, update soon

Really good! I love Anne/Charles and these short glimpses/explanations of their relationship, I'd like to learn more about it.