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  Guest chapter 11 . 4/27/2014 I know you haven't updated this story in awhile, but I also like the idea of exploring how Olivia, Peter, and Etta life's look with the new adorable addition of Finn! Please? :) |
 justin19xx chapter 11 . 9/25/2013 Hmm.. Well, technically, Finn would be both Olivia's and Liv's since Peter said he was not genetically Olivia's - I could be reading it wrong - but to me it was implying that he was still Liv's genetically. And Olivia said she was 97% genetically identical - so technically he would biologically be related to both Olivia's, right? I could be wrong. And I don't understand why no on ever tells Liv (in any fanfics or the show) that she had a son with Peter.. I mean, that's kind of a big deal. I imagine it could hurt Liv, but I also think it's pretty substantial information to know about one's self and your own child - even if he never existed within their current timeline. Though, she'd probably laugh-it-off if you had no proof, but still. Meh. Sorry about the mini-rant. :P Anyhow, great chapter/story! |
| cookie chapter 11 . 10/16/2012 awww! i love etta |
| cristina chapter 11 . 8/19/2012 hi, mmm i think you can write a couple of chapters about how olivia adapts to the new baby and maby etta as well |
| S.AFringie chapter 11 . 8/19/2012 Love your work, can't wait for chapter 12. Thanks a mil for sharing. |
| berniej chapter 11 . 8/19/2012 Wow William Bell is really evil this time around! This is fascinating so many different threads with Etta kind of in the middle. I am glad Olivia and Peter got their son safe in the end. Thanks for sharing |
| zeusfluff chapter 11 . 8/18/2012 Another wonderful chapter! I cannot wait to see where you take chapter 12! Please update when you can! Thanks, ZeusFluff |
| helikesitheymikey chapter 8 . 8/6/2012 okay first off I LOVE THIS STORY! btw, one thing that I'm wondering about...in the vision that Etta showed Peter of the would have been future Simon's a decade older than her right? this time around since her mom's not pregnant with her like in the other timeline and she's already grown to age 5 or so...shouldn't that effect how much older Simon is when she was technically "born"? I mean say that Simon was 10 in the first timeline when she was born and he'd be 10 now in this timeline but she's already five or so...that at least knocks around 5 years off of the age difference. haven't read your newer chaps so I don't know if you've dealt with the age difference already |
| cristina chapter 10 . 8/4/2012 hi! great chapter... please don't take too long for the next one!. :) |
| zeusfluff chapter 10 . 8/4/2012 Wonderful chapter! I cannot wait to see where you take chapter 11! Please update when you can! Thanks, ZeusFluff |
| berniej chapter 10 . 8/4/2012 Great chapter she really is special isn't she? I think this Liv and our Olivia could be just as close as this...they connected well I think. Thanks for sharing |
| cristina sanchez chapter 9 . 7/14/2012 hi, i just found this page and i have to say I LOVE YOUR STORIES. please keep posting! love your writing PERUVIAN FRINGE FAN cristina |
| zeusfluff chapter 9 . 7/14/2012 My bad, I've actually read these two chapters already earlier today... Here is a review as promised... Please update when you can! I cannot wait to see where you go with chapter 10! Thanks, ZeusFluff |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2012 Your writting is exceptional. I love the way you stay true to the origional characters. It almost makes me feel like I'm experiencing the best of Fringe, so much that I slept at 2 in the morning. I love your stories. GIVE ME MORE! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/10/2012 Awesome chapter as always! Cannot wait to see where you take chapter 10! Please update when you can! Thanks, ZeusFluff |
