Oh gosh, this chapter hit hard.

Well... this creature definitely sounds creepy. I'm very worried for both Legolas and Gimli now.
That aside, I found the idea of Arwen trying to convince Legolas to tell her the reason for Gimli's departure to be really funny.

The format takes a little getting used to, but I think this is a good start definitely! I love seeing Gimli in love. It makes me want to meet this dwarf maiden who has stolen his heart.

So now they are both guilty of hurting him, and doing so at the worst of times as well. Also I object to the term fight in what Gimli did. A fight is generally a disagreement between two or more people. However misguided it was, he assaulted Legolas physically and mentally. I know the elf will no doubt forgive his friend given time but trust has been lost here and needs to be regained. Celanuil, too made a mistake he let his anger over come consideration and compassion for his ailing friend. Both of his friends will have to cope with their actions as will Legolas.

Hello, can you fix the text lines? It's all beoken in places :S

Beautiful.

Noo! You should have let gimli go, then Legolas would be all sad and whathisname would feel guilty and fluffiness created!

And right about now my mother is going to wonder why tears are flowing from my eyes like rivers...

Awww. Loved the whole thing. And this was a really cute chapter. Keep writing! You're really good!

So two hours later I finish reading and realize that while this is one of my fav fics I read last year, it's not the one I was looking for. However, I think I found it. Fuck me.

So I read this on a legolas&gimli hurt/comfort fic binge around Christmas 2013 and somehow this and another fic got fused together in my memory and anyways flash forward almost a year later I see some fanart on tumblr and I'm like "hmmm I wanna read some lotr fic what was that really good h/c thing I read that one time" and I've literally read through everything on ff.n and ao3 and even some sketchy dawn-of-the-internet homegrown sites trying to find this fic and anyways the few details I remembered were the galadriel thing at the end and the "would you rather die here or under the stars" line and the two-horses-carrying-a-stretcher thing and literally 3 hours of creative google searches later I finally found this fic. Fucking hell, now I've lost the attention span and energy to even read it. So yeah now I'm just saving it for tomorrow when I can properly enjoy it. Fml. I thought you'd find my story entertaining.

Another very good story
Thank you so much
I loved it .

I believe that Calenuial is a good and honourable being, yet prejudice runs deep, even more when misguided loyalty accompanies it.

What an AWESOME ending!

Calenuial you truly are a stupid elf. Truly idiotic.