Awww poor deweydewey. thankfully, she's staying in ponyville

yay they won

Love it, love everything about it. Dewey is funny

fight fight fight

Thank goodness for Celestia and Luna

That's what happens when you falsely accuse somepony.

Is she killing her friends?

So, it's a ghost or I guess I should say darkness of NMM?

Aww, she was trying to help.

I think Twilight could have better worded what she trying to say.

I hope Fluttershy gets all her animals back.

That was pretty harsh of her to say that to Rarity.

Again she was trying to help. No need to be so rude about it. Wait, she did it

Awww poor Twilight, it was only a small lie.

I don't think you captured Celestias personality right.

I wonder what happened to make luna react like that

Poor Twilight. Your friends won't hate you just because you're late to the party. That's kinda creepy hearing her own voice calling out for help.

That was smart of Luna to come to Twilight, if anyone could help her. It would be her

Excellent, new update. Keep up the good work :)

Can't wait for the epic battle on the MOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN-AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH! Where there are no bananas. :3 (Friendship is Magic Bitch)

OHMYGOSH AGAIN THIS IS PERFECT! The story continues to be awesome! Please continue, I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!

OMGWTF THIS IS AMAZINNGGGGG! You are incredible! With the slightest amount of error, perfect storyline, awesome sequences, and wonderful writing, I can say no more about this beauty of a story. You my friend, must continue, don't give up on this, continue being the best you can be while writing this.

Great job! I love it so far :) and I can't wait to see what nega-Twilight does next...

OHMYGOSH CONTINUE THIS IS AMAAAZZZZIIIIINNNNGGGGG! I don't know, this story is just so awesome!