Beautiful...No other words.

Rare occurance. Well done

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Why would they cut such a scene?! This was fantastic. A.

i have always wanted to see that deleted scene, i wish it was on the dvds. i'm going to to tweet joel when he comes on,one ad ask if he still has the footage for it

This is wonderful. I love missing scene stories! The imagery with the rain is beautiful. You really bring out the horror of the story, with the mercury spilling out from Charlie's body. Well done!

fabulous and beautiful. you are a vry talented writer, and it's a joy to read your work.