Impractical Jokers

Not a bad idea for a story even if it has been done many times before. However, it needs a beta. The writing is juvenile and the grammar is bad. Some sentences seem to be missing words. Love after one date? How desperate is Harry? It will be interesting to see how you get Harry away from the idiots. I hope it is original.

So, I'm just wondering if you realise that this story is so fast paced that nothing makes sense, why would the goblins suddenly show up for almost no reason? Why are we switching between perspectives almost every other sentence? Did you ever actually look through this and proof read, cause it certainly looks like a draft with every scene as an outline than a finished story.

I am speechless..
Its like humor, but not funny

Well, Ronny boy you just gave away your plan which is now screwed six ways to Sunday.

What's Harry planning? I can't wait to find out.

Wow. Ron the death eater trope in full view.

Okay...what's this rather slimy version of Dumbles up to?

Hmm . Harry gets sent to Azkaban according to the summary. So...what next?

Wow! So Dumbles isn't just an utter asshole and bastard, he's also a psychopath.

Wow! Dumbles is an utter asshole and bastard. I hope Harry gives him and that slut Ginny their comeuppance.

It's just too cliched for my taste. I thought I would give this kind of fic a try since its been a long time but clearly not long enough

Great story

Not to be mean or anything but Ubetiburn was only pointing out many mistakes that were in this story. So there was really no point in blocking them. Other than that, great story!

Wow this was great, also thanks for recommending 'do not meddle in the affairs of wizards' I'm currently reading it and it's great.