Eeep! Antonio has his work cut out for him and damn Lovino is one cold bastard in his first impression...

Mother of all fucks you can't just leave it there! And Antonio can't die! Like son of Satin that's so not cool! Update soon please for the love of all Poseidon!

Oooo! I watched the two episodes of Free! to! :D You cannot convince me that Makoto doesn't resemble Spain XD

At first, I wasn't sure how I thought of Feli. Now, I have returned to seeing him as a precious bambino. With problems. Poor dear.

Hahaha! Lovino taking a weapon from Antonio "by force?!" Yeah freaking right! That prick couldn't even escape from without Antonio's help! That's a good one! As if! If Antonio didn't love him, Antonio would show him the true meaning of "force!" Keep pretending you're tough, Lovino. It's funny.

Um...why is this chapter so badly formatted after the great success of the other chapters?

Another suspense-filled and action packed chapter! But I think you should let up a little on calling Antonio "stupid" or "dumb" since although he can't quite read the atmosphere in relationships sometimes, he's FAR from "dumb."

Oh and as for the the Author's Note, just FYI, Spain actually had a MUCH lower public debt than most European countries (at first, it was just about 30%-40% of GDP) but what really hurt him was his very high unemployment rate (over 25%) and the fall of his once lucrative housing market. He high public debt now (though still less than what other countries have) but it's mostly because of the EU austerity and banking laws rather than his own public spending. I just thought I'd clarify that. But, it's so nice for you to be looking out for Europe!

Very funny and interesting chapter but I found the whole "Lovi"- "What the hell's a Lovi?" thing WAY too cliched. And I also think that the narration is bit too distracting sometimes even though it usually brings a funny and unique.

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Don't worry about me I'm picking up the huge hints! I'm loving this story ! GOING MY FAVS!

So, I like this story so far, but I do have one complaint: you're using an awful lot of foreign language. It's okay to throw in some random words or phrases, or, if you want to show that not everyone understands what's going on (ex: Feli and Lovi speaking Italian in the caff), but when it shows up in excess, it makes it difficult for the reader. Your entire last paragraph, while well-written, was essentially useless to me, because I had no clue what was going on until I read the translations. If the characters are in a scene where everyone can understand each other, go ahead and use English; the reader understands that the characters are not actually speaking english and won't be bothered by them not speaking their native language.

Wow...this was pretty good and MAN did it feel good when Antonio slugged that bitch! I mean I know she was just training him but calling him "weak" and a "child?!" Woman, now I KNOW you ain't talking about Toni! "Hell of a right hook" damn straight! That's Spanish power! It took out half the world, Napoleon and even handed the Americans their asses in some land battles! No Israeli army did those things! Go Antonio! Time to show everyone what a conquistador can do! :D

Ahem...anyways...very well written chapter! Feli's inner turmoil is really eating at him. Poor tortured Lovino...Get there soon, Antonio. :(

Wow...this was great! You explained Feli's wierd sickness and psychosis in such a raw, realistic way. His relationship with his mom is definitely an eye opener! And even at the end, Feli's hesitation...awesome! Great job!

This chapter was very good, but...I recommend not writing so much in another language if you're not really fluent in it. I don't know about the Italisn but there were some misktakes with the Spanish. Maybe using Spanishdictdotcom would be more helpful than Google Translate. Other than that, this chpater was catchy!

A very interesting and original AU! A nice added twist with Psycho!Rome and Psycho!Feli. Nicely done! But lol...if Lovino thinks Antonio is "more defenseless" than him he really is the dense one! XD