| Reviews for The Great Mistake of Severus Snape |
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   Philipp Zero chapter 10 . 7/5 Uh... Lily!? Is she really serious? I mean, she tell Severus they can go to Hogsmeade together, she let him take her hand in his, she kiss him, she doesn't understand why he is acting cold when Remus interrupts them and she LITERALLY abandon him during a date (!?). Then she began sitting on James lap while thinking how much Severus is dark, evil and she shouldn't fancy him. And after this, when confronted to the both of them under the willow tree, she cower away?! Is she really a Griffindor? I don't like J Potter, but here, I can't help but feel bad for both of the guys... If only they could put they hatred to the side for about 2 seconds and see from their own eyes that they are both STRONGLY being led on by that girl... Seeing how she play with them (maybe unintentionally, but still, this is just twisted), it wouldn't surprise me if in her cute little world, she was to go on a date with the both of them, on the SAME day. And what I think is the worst, is the fact she is so self-centered, she doesn't even seem to realise what she is doing... Poor James and Severus... Sorry for the rant, I tend to really dislike people playing with other's feelings in real life. |
| lonelyguyfarhan1 chapter 45 . 3/9/2019 Actually found the marauders scene nauseating. But you wrote it so well that I didn't throw up. Hope you kill of the little devils in the future. Lots of love |
| lonelyguyfarhan1 chapter 45 . 3/9/2019 It's incredibly distasteful seeing James be so happy now. God I hope he suffers the painful death he deserves later on in the story. |
| lonelyguyfarhan1 chapter 43 . 3/8/2019 Holy freaking shits! This chapter was an absolute masterpiece! Only brought forth through several superbly built up characters over a period of time! Your writing is absolutely amazing! And damn, James needs to die. |
| lonelyguyfarhan1 chapter 39 . 3/6/2019 So much love and respect for writing such an amazing story! I will look to review the other chapters when I have time. Severus and lily's characters spot on imo. Extremely true to cannon. |
| lonelyguyfarhan1 chapter 18 . 2/24/2019 This chapter was absolutely amazing! You write intimate scenes so well! Lots of love! |
| lonelyguyfarhan1 chapter 14 . 2/23/2019 Don't you think Potter would havr bled to death? |
| lonelyguyfarhan1 chapter 14 . 2/23/2019 You made a mistake. James should be bleeding profusely because of sectum sempra |
| lonelyguyfarhan1 chapter 13 . 2/23/2019 An amazing chapter this! |
| lonelyguyfarhan1 chapter 12 . 2/23/2019 Daaamn! Lily is so cruel teasing him like that |
| lonelyguyfarhan1 chapter 11 . 2/23/2019 More, more, more! Lets them fuck eack others brains out dammit! Aaaaaaaaaaaaaah! |
| lonelyguyfarhan1 chapter 10 . 2/22/2019 Absolutely amazing chapter! The range of feelings and bliss you made me feel was sensational! Lots of love! |
| lonelyguyfarhan1 chapter 8 . 2/22/2019 Absolutely amazing writing so far. Your building up the characters incredibly well. And james and lily moments are still nauseating, but I haven't thrown up yet, so you are doing something right. |
| lonelyguyfarhan1 chapter 6 . 2/21/2019 Your writing is absolutely amazing! Even though lily and james together is fundamentally nauseating, you write it so well, that it is tolerable. |
| Guest chapter 59 . 11/7/2018 Wow ! Your story is amazing ! Are you still planning to update anymore ? I really can't wait ...! |
