Do you know what a comma is? Please use them. This is basically unreadable

It’s ‘who taught him Oclumency’

I would say that Cat's perents were Bellatrix and her stepfather was Rodolphus and as for a godly father I would say that it might be Hades as well.

Can I translate your story and publish it on a wattpad? The language that I would like to translate is Polish.

Excellent story! Thanks.. On to the next part..

*occlumency?

This story, up until you put in so many Wizarding demi-gods showed an incredible amount of promise. Unfortunately, this is a cross-over trope that I personally loathe. Something about the whole 'oh, and everyone is a demi-god, or everyone is a wizard' idea just never sits well with me. I guess it's just a bit too much for me to be able to believe could go so thoroughly unnoticed in either world and kind of ruins the whole immersion. It's a personal preference thing, but I figured I'd jot down a comment explaining why I and potentially others like me might find it to be a huge turn-off.

When reading a cross-over, I find it more enjoyable when you can believe both of the canon universes that are being brought together could still be thoroughly accurate on their own and have the events occurring in them go largely unchanged if not for one character or another blurring or intruding past the dividing line to somewhat merge their two worlds together. With so many people belonging to both worlds, the events of both books would not feasibly occur as the did even without Harry there to change things. It sort of nullifies both worlds simultaneously as logically, if such a versatile and powerful race of people like wizards existed in the PJ&O universe, the world-threatening battles we see playing out the way they do really shouldn't play out exactly as they did in the books. Additionally, the events of Harry Potter's world, particularly the use of Horcrux's undoubtedly would not have been simply overlooked without divine interference.

With so many demi-gods especially supposed to be Hogwarts attendees, the students of Hogwarts should not have been as cowardly and pathetic against the Death Eaters as they for the most part were. Sorry for rambling on, I just wanted to explain why this trope you chose to utilize with seemingly no advantageous results to your story can come across as a turn-off worthy of dropping the story entirely. I understand that as you aren't making money off of this, you wrote it simply for your own enjoyment, and can respect that. Thank you for taking the time to post it for other's enjoyment as well.

what kind of monster was she?

And here we go again! All because she is named Hermione, she is so-called smart! Disgusting!
Everyone makes her out as something outstanding smart just to give her any worth. Centuries-old books that haven't seen the light of day, she got somehow her hands on it. Books only for certain families, she somehow reads them. Families that have lived for long centuries in the magical world and studying its art. She suddenly knows better than them.

Just delete this disgusting story if you decide to put all-knowing muggle blood in the story.
She is worthless and incompetence.

I call bullshit about Malfoy older family. I bet they just bribed the Ministry to falsify the records.
Sorry but I already started to hate this story when I read that you put Malfoy so high! Disgusting.
Its a french name and I don't think that they ever should have reached so far without the help of the Voldemort.

uh wait for my peace of mind can you tell me if you're gonna follow the ritual in the fourth movie? harry is a bloody demi god the ritual uses his blood I mean I wouldn't mind if there is a horrible side effect to it that just kills him faster but if not would he have some powers then? that I'd just nerve wracking if that happens.I just need to know if you're gonna involve taking Harry's blood to resssurect voldy.

ahh why I can't stand children too innocent for my tastes sometimes.

Quick Question about Harry's sword. Since the sword was made in the Underworld and is ment for a child of Hades, would it be able to destroy Horcroxes like Riddle's dairy? or would he still need Baslisk poison and/ or cursed Fire? Also can he command Inferi? (If he still goes for that FAKE Horcrox in book 6, the one that is protected by Inferi) Also, since Horcroxes has a piece of someone's soul, wouldn't he know of the one at the school, and if so, can't he summon it using his demigod powers?

Again, sorry
Your: possession
You’re: you are
Remember the easiest way to remember is “can you replace it with you are” it’s a tried and true method, hasn’t failed me so far

This is just because I’m a bit of a grammar nut, so please be aware that I do this because I won’t be able to sleep if I don’t, and mean no harm through it:
Their: property
There: location
They’re: they are
So at one point it should be “their classrooms”, not “there classrooms”