So I'll be honest. I was in the shower while I was reading this and you made me check outside the shower curtain about 5 times. It was great I absolutely love this chapter.

I'm not upset you killed Edward...I just wish you hadn't had to kill Jasper...

This was such a great story! Thank you for sharing!

Hello, I am a girl from Spain. I have to say that usually I don't read crossovers because honestly, it always throws me out of the loop reading mixed characters and I have to say that I just was looking for new fics of Bella - Edward from Twilight. Long time ago I was one of those girls with the eyes on the screen watching Supernatural and I always had a soft spot for "bad guys that aren't that bad". So yes, I confess that I just got your fic just without looking for it, but I have to say that I liked it. Well written and with a nice plot and long... I love long fics because they give you the chance to really put yourself inside the story. So I just wanted to say congratulations for your story, I had a nice time reading it :)

Great story, well written.
This chapter felt a bit anticlimactic, with how easy they dealt with the angel. Also felt a lot mushy, with how fluffy and cuddly the main characters were. And I can't shake off the feeling that you had to cut parts off, like you skipped over something...
But all in all, I loved the story. You can tell I was into it just by the fact that despite hating some characters I still stuck around ;P

That's exactly it! She DID make it clear, and she has zero right to expect a warm welcome from him. She should be happy he didn't throw her out himself.

Oh, look, dear Bella, the poor guilt-barer, is suffering. Oh dear, it sucks so much when she does to others what she hates been done to her, and these others don't appreciate it. So sad, so sad...

To be honest, I hate her with a passion now. Dean is too good for her, she doesn't deserve him. I don't like that he's in pain, but if she dies it better be painful and slow. Just saying...

And of course Bella needs to be a drama queen and go all crazy over the top. Canon to the letter. Any sane person will go through every possible emotion internally before sitting down to talk about it. But no, she needs to do something overly stupid, because how else will we know she's the big-saint-that-suffers-for-the-other's-happiness...

There is no way for a smooth talk. It is scary how well I understand Bella in this situation O.O And she's a character I do not particularly care about.
The whole situation was written in a perfect style! The phase was great in delivering the choppiness of emotions and actions - I could feel the stress and fear and urgency. Very well done!

Yep, someone watching you sleep is creepy, no matter the situation.

The story is so good, Bella gets on my nerves as much as with the Twilight books ;) You are developing her character, but I like that you didn't gloss over the change, and are making it happen little by little with each chapter :)

I remember this episode of supernatural, it's so cool how you plugged Bella into it. it's seamless.

absolutely love this story couldn't put it down and now it's nearly time I should be waking up 4 the day lol..

this was a masterpiece, just incredible

I positively loved this story. You have an amazing talent with writing. You pulled me into this world you created and it was awe inspiring. This is the first Dean/Bella story I've read and you have me hooked now! I'm sorry I didn't review every chapter. It was like I couldn't stop long enough to write to you, I just had to keep reading. Your story is by far my all time favorite!