Beautiful AU. I loved it even if it's almost painful Sansa's hope, Stannis won't come to save her. The Hound was drunk and frightened just as I imagined him to be. It's nice that they didn't kiss, it was bittersweet like it had to be.

Ah, this is lovely, thank you!

I like your version of this scene. She had a reason for staying, she knew that she would burden him. GRRM doesn't give that explanation, and it always bugged me. Thanks for a nice little story.

I would love for you to continue with this story. I am eager to know what happens next.

You have a lot of talent! But what happens next? I want more : (. As always a very good pace and a perfect writing.
Writers like you makes me looking in FF and enjoy a world completely SanSan. Thanks and more, more, more please, haha.

Lovely fic - well written, nicely phrased, not a lot of fluff. Your grammar was good, and you captured the visual effect of GoT without a camera. Not that you asked, but I'd give it a 10/10.

great job