That's really deep. It's great, Aerrow finally got back at Cyclonis! :D

Holy crap. Horrifying. Horrifyingly dark. And well written. But horrifying. (the neck scene reminded me of a similar scene in the film 'Hobo with a Shotgun'. The visuals were NOT pretty.)

And the last line? Clever.

So dark. I like it.

I'm speechless. That was the best thing I've read in a very long time. Good Lord, that was fantastic. I was nauseated and captivated all at once. The writing was beyond superb and the portrayal of character was fantastic. I loved the idea and adored the entirety of it. Wow. Saying that I'm impressed would be the understatement of the year.

Brilliant ending, by the way. Great work! You have exceptional talent and you certainly put the rest of us to shame.

Stupid technology won't let me log in...

So anyway, I will clearly declare you as a brilliant author. I don't really see Aerrow bashing up Cyclonis, however in this mental state, I believe this would have been his course of action.

I also had I lovely spine tingly moment where you wrote about Cyclonis cutting Piper's neck. That was... Delicious. (Sorry, I can't think of another word). Rarely, stories on FF give me this reaction, but that moment was spine tingling good.

Ok, goodbye now and I can't wait for more of your stories.

Whoa.

A dark-Aerrow story. I don't see him as the kind of person who'd hit anyone, especially a woman, but this still makes a lot of sense.

Totally loved it. The way Piper died made me cringe, but it was perfect.

This is a favourite.

Great use of words and nice direction of the story, just a few minor issues though

Cyclonis can teleport XD

sorry...someone had to say it ;)

a little bit bloddy but not bad. i want read more