It’s been so long since this was updated but after the disaster of season 8 I’ve come back to reread. Love this and hope you update one day soon

"Dis-ease" should be "unease"... Still, good story!

Wish you update love this story

Arya is extremely out of character I feel, with her little emotional breakdown here.
I get you try to portray her as still a child, and that reconnecting with her family might have changed things for her as wellbut she's tougher than this. Throwing a fit, slapping her sister, running away in tears, babbling like a maniac? Maybe appropriate for a normal girl her age, but she's not even close to normal. Killed several people, trained to fight, watched her father executed before her, lived on the run fending for herself young, was essentially behind enemy lines serving Tywin as a cup bearer, ordered men murdered to escape.
She had been through much and grown too much prior to your story starting for me to accept this outburst from her.
However, this story was interesting, a good few concepts. Quite far from asoiaf thougheveryone happy and together? Not possible :P

Did the dragons go from small enough for Arya to hold them in her arms to as large as a horse in one chapter? o.O

I've enjoyed it. And I like what's going on with Jamie. And the progression for arya growing up is pretty nice. The little comments that show shes not just that kid.
I do hope we can see a bit more her and Dany. Just to show what they have isn't fading by her family being back

The Dothraki would have never accepted Arya, one way or the other. Makes reading this story feel like Arya is OOC.

I started reviewing your later chapters, but I just want you to know I used the pseudonym Just Waiting to write them before I remembered what my password was. Lol.
I love your story, btw. Thank you for writing it

I hit post review before I was finished!
Idk where I was... Jon was busy breaking his sisters' hearts...
Sansa, your trauma is showing. Hold onto your mother, my sweet child.
I wonder how Bran is holding up? Him and Rickon seem to be doing better, now that their family is back. I'm glad.
Dany and Ygritte better chill with this rivalry b.s. I ain't havin it!
Also, Catelyn... thank you.
Arya studying under Syrio once more... A.
Arya, Khal Drogo and baby Dany all hanging out in the midlife? AAA Beautiful. Absolutely astounding.
Robb is alive. That's some good shit.
Thank you for everything you've written. It's an amazing and so well done. Thank you!

WOOH! Shit just got dark.
Jaime... dude, what are you going to Do?
Cersei... how will you react?
Tyrells, you power hungry women, I love you.
Jon... You you are breaking your sisters hearts.

I just want you to know, the title of this chapter scared the SHIT out of me.
My poor baby Jon.
But FINALLY! THE STARKS ARE ALL TOGETHER! I wish Jon could be happy. Maybe Arya can cheer him up.
He just needs to hang out with his siblings and stop feeling guilt for things beyond his control. That control freak.
It's Jon's way or the highway!

Poor fucking Jaimie. Or however his name is spelled.
I like Margeary, but I want Dany to be queen.

Awww! 3 Dany being worried about her sister.
Gendry, no! Be safe.
Jon and Dany bonding over people hating them for things they couldn't control. 3
The Starks reuniting 3 TT_TT poor Sansa. Soon. Soon.
Also, A to Syrio being alive, is why I didn't say anything before.

Go Sansa, go!
She'll get home. I know it

is this a dany and arya fanfic?