So far this is excellent! A few grammatical errors but otherwise really well done! You write Mycroft and his grief beautifully.

Loved this story. Took a long time to get thru and I hope you write another!

So, it's now been about a month or so since I finished both Deleted Memories & Forgotten Memories (which I basically read straight thru, one to the next, altho not being Stephen Hawking, that took me close to a week) BUT my point (and I do have one) is that I was in the process of retrieving yet another truly lengthy fanfic; noticed that the author kept asking her readers for comments; and it suddenly occurred to me that no matter how much I tried, I could not recall whether or not I actually sent you a comment once I finished your epic tales.

Which I absolutely, totally loved (not to say that I would ever wish for Sherlock to be kidnapped, and/or tortured, and/or sexually assaulted by heinous individuals who should not be walking this earth) but simply that the stories were well-written; suspenseful; clearly filled with action and adventure; involved delving into emotions that Sherlock would never wish exposed; involved selfless actions on the part of Mycroft simply so that his brother could live without the horror of his father's worst actions towards him, even tho he was aware of the break it would cause in their relationship; involved delving into the mind of a psychopath, and doing in a manner that actually appeared believable; and kept me riveted long, long after I had finished reading the fanfics themselves.

I still read WIPs, just because, but I am so much happier reading finished stories (even tho it doesn't give you (the author) the deserved praise and strength to continue forward, with the knowledge that YES, people are out there reading your work... But, TBH, being able to read through both of your stories maybe early December? (my brain is simply not functioning) but whenever that particular week was, having that opportunity was a privilege, like winning a golden ticket in Charlie and the Chocolate Factory (I have absolutely no idea why that came into my head...) But, in any case, if I already said all this stuff and I'm repeating myself, you will (obviously) know that I truly, truly meant it. And, if I did, in fact, totally forget to write and tell you how completely awesome you are, YOU ARE COMPLETELY AWESOME!

This story is absolutely amazing. You have managed to write every single person in their own style and imitated them great. I love the many ideas that are hiding behing this story. It is worth every review.

It was probably a bad idea to read this in one sitting but I couldn't help it I was totally hooked. I have never read a fic over 50 chapters before and this is almost 200 but you kept me intrigued all the way through. I would've loved some more lestrade but I don't even care cause this was soooo good! I'm smiling like an idiot and I'm not gonna hide it!

Thank you for writing this sequel to Deleted Memories. I'm a late comer to "Sherlock" and Fanfiction in general... and you are my top three authors here! You are brilliant with your true to characters, sense of drama, sequences that make sense, and the little extra touches of famous quotes and translations. Your stories are just as rich as the actual series, and I REALLY appreciate your talent. Thank you, again. Cheers!

Hey! I actually really enjoyed this first chapter:) It described the normal everyday life of "Sherlock" really well, and I love how you included Mrs Hudson too, can't wait to keep reading :

I have read both stories (or should I say short books ) and I am utterly astounded at there brilliance. You have captured the characters and their personalities as well as voices to absolute perfection and you should be incredibly proud of yourself and of your amazing skills as a writer. If it were possible I would ask you to send your stories to Steven Moffit and Mark Gatiss to have them put it on screen (starring our beloved Benedict Cumberbatch and Martin Freeeman of course) so that everyone in the world can experience a story that caused more than one emotional lump to stick in my throat as well as laugh out loud until my mascara ran helplessly down my face. I am most eager to see that amazing tales you come up with next.

Well, that's a nice turn of events. Those two peabrains having their mouth hanging wide open :-)

They have both come a long and stony way, to now stand there and say these words. Great chapter

You just have to adore Lestrade for his speech

Sherlock's mum seeing her grandson for the first time, that is something to witness. Need to smile just thinking of it

Another series of events during these last chapters, with a lot of twists and turns. You keep us glued to the plot.
Sally is developing nicely and Blake should suit Agent Thomas.
Good thing, Sherlocks Homeless Network is at its best, cheers to them.

Thomas is great, like the way you placed his character. And good Mycroft still having the big view of everything possible and probable

Hi, I'm back on track reading your fabulous story. What can I say, you have the ability to just nail the character. Just like a pouting Sherlock