Reviews for Pool Party
Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2018
I like the thing about how huey was scaring boys of jasmine since 7th grade. Can you do one were they are in 7th grade based on that and them having them sex dreams.
AdriJ254 chapter 1 . 3/22/2017
Awwww it's so cute! I just got done reading the pursuit of happiness. I assume it's not gonna get anymore chapters, but it was cool while it lasted!
huey.is.bae.143 chapter 1 . 7/28/2015
Yass! this story was on fleek. OMG you have a gift.
Sloppy chapter 1 . 5/30/2015
Omg this is amazing, I love this story! Please don't abandon it! Please give us chapter 8 of Persuit of happiness!
Jessii chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
Awwww :) cute
Izzy chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
Awwww!
amanda chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
write more!
ILoveYou1234567890123 chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
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Schweetpea1870 chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
this was such a CUTE one-shot! i loved it! :D

awww, look how whipped Huey is to Jazmine already. can't help but say yes to her :)

damn Granddad, you gave Huey a condom though? old man's such a mess. you SHOULD be givin' yo youngest grandson a condom! buuuutt, yeaaaahh. hahaha ;)

shit, Huey's moanin' Jazmine's name in his sleep? awww snap, the boy's got it baaadd ;)

hahha, the two of them getting Riley & Cindy with the water guns was cuute! and then Huey's slip-up? "No. I'm going to get you wet... Wait. No, not li-like that. I-I meant that I was going to get you soaked…. No. No! I'm trying to say I'm gonna come and—" LMAO! proceed to put both yo feet in your mouth, nigga! ;)

awwwwww, the part where Jazmine was asking him if he thought she was pretty and stuff was sooo cute cuz Huey's thoughts were precious! so sweet!

i absolutely loved this! great job! :D
avery vaughan chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
This is so good! Love it. I am so excited for Not Just Friends. I really like it.
Jazavelli chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
This was super cute, I loved it.

Awh Huey that boy is so guarded it's unreal. Riley made me laugh as always exposing Huey's dreams about Jaz.

Nice one shot :)
Paige1292 chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
Aww! They're cute! I love this. And look. At granddad givin Huey a condom lol too funny.