| Reviews for A 'Goode' Surprise |
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  Guest chapter 19 . 6/25 Wow |
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/18 How is the captain of a sports team a loser? This plot is disappointingly bad. |
 PercabethFL26 chapter 22 . 6/14 It's ok I almost scraped my work yesterday because I was doubting myself. but all you need is friend and family support. I hope your life is well. ~PercabethFL26 |
| AK chapter 9 . 5/13 Ahh my heart is about to burst from the cuteness in this! Though I think people sometimes forget that Annabeth is the 2 time saviour of Olympus too, she played a major role in both wars. |
| WolfX Rox chapter 1 . 4/19 Hey Guest OOC means Out Of Character |
| Lmao chapter 1 . 4/16 What does OOC stand for? Please tell me _ |
| Nobody chapter 4 . 4/11 You saying that your story is most likely better than the other ones just makes you sound like a stuck up jerk and makes me all the more hesitant to read your story and support someone who thinks they're better than everyone else. Yes, you are entitled to your own opinions BUT that does not mean that you can just go around trashing other people's work. |
| Nobody chapter 11 . 4/11 you just completely forgot about Kayla and Austin from Apollo cabin, and they were the only other named kids from the Apollo cabin |
| AD2107 chapter 8 . 3/31 I loved chapter 8! It was so funny! U r such a talented writer! When r u gonna publish a book? Can u give me some tips? Please? (Insert puppy dog eyes here) |
| Searcher chapter 1 . 1/15 The only reason why I bookmarked this, is cus the other stories are so KRIFFING SHORT! AS SHORT AS AN ANT! Through, may not take priority since I saw AN... |
| Secret chapter 19 . 1/15 Zoe's parent is a titan Atlas |
| Secret chapter 2 . 1/14 What does OOC stand for? |
| person chapter 18 . 1/11 yesss the son of sobel was amazing i also read the staff of sarapis and the crown of ptolemy they were amazing |
| Ethan76 chapter 9 . 10/12/2019 So, personally I feel like this had a lot of potential but it kind of spiralled out of control after ch1. I get the cliché bullying thing with Lyle and the whole "Nico doesn't like colors because he's emo" but I think as a whole it just feels off and forced. Conceptually this is a great story but I think it should be re-written and edited a lot more. Sword fighting in school sounds awesome but in reality is just a lawsuit unless you have waivers being signed. Things like that and the stilted reactions just make this need a face-lift. I'll probably stick with this for now but I truly recommend going over it and re-writing. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/1/2019 AWESOME! That was real cute. |
