Okay I can tell you write Rick just like the show. Got to the last line of his thinking and stared shacking my head and said what I unusually say. "You stupid ass". Thank you for your gift

This is wonderful! I love your interpretations of Castle, the dialogue and Martha and Alexis' thought processes. Spot on and insightful and fun.

The best show in town, indeed.

Thanks for writing.

Just discovered your stories and thought I'd go back to the beginning. This was wonderful! Love the last 3 paragraphs. Perfect description of why we all watch the show! Thanks for writing!

:)))))

Beautiful

Funny and sweet

Beautiful

Love Martha and Rick and Kate's banter , perfect

Thank you
Beautiful

I am late reading this but I am so glad I did. It's cute and the banter is fantastic.

I truly heard Martha's voice while reading this. really loved it.

As it is, you were wrong, and Alexis came home drunk, hahaha! ;)
This was great, I could so hear Martha saying all these lines, and I also loved how she watched the two of them together, at the end, seeing them so natural and happy together. Very sweet.

Oh, I love this. Them through Martha's eyes. This is awesome!
And I love they just assumed it was somebody else, because things didn't really end well between Kate and Castle.
The best show in town. Hahahaha Very, very nice.

I love Martha! In the show and here. And I can totally imagine her giving such advice! I wonder what goes in the the next 3 chapters. Martha or Kate. Or both. Hmmm...

You have got martha's voice down perfectly

Very nicely written - the misunderstanding was terrific.

I love Martha. This was terrific.

I promise I won't write you another ridiculous long review like I did for chapter 1, so I'm just going to say that I loved everything about this. I love the way you built up to the moment when Martha discovered it was Alexis, and Castle's reaction. :)

I'm always the over-thinker, so after every episode I imagine a million and one related scenarios in my head, but I never actually considered Martha's reaction when Castle continued to go to the precinct. Not sure how I
Missed that, but anyway I guess I don't have to imagine it now! This was great. I could totally hear Martha saying those things, and she was suitably dramatic, not overly so as I've seen her written before in other fics. Great writing, :)

This story made me smile. I've often imagined Alexis coming home to find wet clothes on the floor, and I love how you wrote it! Great job with Martha;, her dry wit and straight talking is perfect. As always, amazing job writing Caskett banter.