She would have marshadow

OMFG. I CAN'T EVEN. YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER. *overload quit*

i started to read this story because i thought the idea sounded interesting. i really didn't think that you could pull it off though. i am now having to thank you for proving me wrong. this is a very enjoyable story and just what i needed write know.

This has to be the best pokemon story ive ever read. I cried when san died. your emotions and everything is just so...

Why is everything suddenly in a single paragraph?
that makes this very hard to read you know.

This is one of the first 15 chapter story that I could read beginning to end with very few stops. Only one break! And that was because it was two thirty a.m.

Okay, these chapters are way to short. You need more description, more everything. Your story is boring. Put more into it.

The big paragraph kinda ruined everything. I suggest breaking it up. You know, when another person starts talking, it starts a new paragraph. And when you have something that big, most people will just find a different story to read. Break up the paragraphs, and you'll be fine

But... But... Felix...

What happened to Latios? Where did Latias dissaper to

I bet San thinks she is a Pokemon not a human

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaa aaasssssssseeee make a sequel!

you did a great job, butI am a little curious on 1 thing, didn't you know san is Miss, Mister, and Misses in Romaji (Romanized Japanese). Also that 3 in Romaji is spelled san.

Oooh, cant wait for next chapter!

wow!
she dead dang :(

BYE! :(