Hey! I'm a Carolina girl to! Living at the base of the Blue Ridge Mountains - we close enough to be considered neighbors! Idk if you still see reviews of read them. You wrote this story long ago but I just recently found it and it's wonderful! I loved Twilight up until New Moon! That's when I wanted to shake "Bella" and say get a grip! Can't you see the way your being manipulated! SM wrote her to seem strong but what I saw was a girl being conspired against by the Cullens. To me your story was an inspiration for girls to be strong and follow their heart! As teenagers we are allowed to make mistakes. But we learn and grow! Your version of Jake n Bells showed that! Their was so many things about this story that I loved! Bella realizing Jake let her make her own choices - Jake embracing his heritage and excepting his rightful place - showing the pack as protectors - and showing Native Americans in a positive light! And adding to the fact that your Jake is sexy as hell! Wish I could have read the unedited version! What women would ever turn down the chance to be loved like that! Bravo! Awesome story!

I just completed this story. It is Jan. 2020. I really enjoyed this saga of all of my favorite characters from "Twilight".

Dammm. I loved the story

I loved this story so so much! I have to admit that the arrangement was a little weird but I'm so glad she made a decision before it even got to the point of having to switch! This story was perfect!

Love this story

It's the BEST Jacob and belle fanfiction I have ever read thank you for writing this wonderful piece of writing. Thank you

I couldn't stop reading and crying...I wish it didn't end

Anyone laugh during Sam and Jacobs conversat?

God I could only imagine getting it that hard. Utvwould be so awesome.

Awesome story Ty so much for writing it please do continue to fallow your dreams . Ty again so much for sharing your vision and writing talents with us.

when u see aro standing on ur doorstep...pray alec is near

Great fic!

Enjoyed your story.

I am overcome with joy and beaming like an idiot to read such a complete and satisfying version of Jacob and Bella's life together. I always thought that Bella's character seemed weaker by staying with Edward and that Edward was selfish and condescending. Jacob is so much more complete and I love stories where Bella is strong enough to leave Edward.
Your talent is great and I have loved spending the past few hours with your characters.

Okay question- why did he want or better yet feel the need 2 go on a vision quest in order 2 marry Bea? Why all of the sudden did he feel the need 2 do this? And what hardship is he gonna face that he needs 2 protect Bea 4rm cuz that is what his vision implies. At least that is what I interpreted 4rm what he saw. And just out of curiosity why would he see a whale? Isn't the tribes sacred animal a wolf. Doesn't a tribe only have one animal sacred 2 them only? And yeah I knw how Bea would feel I would be up a wall as well with worry needing 2 knw if he's alright. Also yeah sage, especially burning sage smells awful. I knw what it smells like.