Wonderful. You can whip out magical stuff from just few words.

Beautiful. :'o
Just beautiful.

Good little drabble - I like the last sentence a lot!

This is an excellent scenario to pick for the prompt and I love the way you've shown all the ways in which the plan was a success, and yet it still doesn't feel like one. Poor Severus :(

Nice description! I love to see this important moment from his pov :)

Ah, my favourite character. Azzie, you darling!

I loved how you mentioned here that Severus wanted to give up, because I've always thought that he wouldn't have wanted to perseveare with all of the things he had to endure in his life. I love your unique interpretation of his character!

He was pushed further into darkness - I've never thought of Snape being forced into the plan, but now you've made me convinced that it's true.

The success that is not really a success. Very haunting and tragic.

Oh, wow. This is really lovely; very intense, and you convey a lot in just a few short words. This really delves into his feelings about this - it's fantastic :)