I know I beta read this chapter, but I still really love it. Their concern for each other is so sweet. Archie's worry that he's being selfish just because he cares about Cherise is heartbreaking and also adorable. Your imagery is, as always, beautiful and well thought out. Thank you for this chapter.

I'm glad you're back. I hope you feel better dear, I always loved this story and the emotions you bring. Beautiful work.

I loved what you did with Puck in this chapter! he's such an entertaining character. I really enjoyed getting to see more of the fairy world. Everything was wonderfully written.

Normally, I don't love fan fiction but this story is amazing. I'm serious. I've been on so many writing websites and no story has left me thinking like I am now about it. It conveys all the emotions so wonderfully and you're a great writer. If this story isn't finished, please continue it because this story is incredible.

As a returning reader who's read this before and fell in love, I want to leave some reviews for the chapters this time. This first chapter does it's job so well. I remember just how much it hooked me into the story, and made me want to understand Cherise. She is such an interesting and intriguing character. I remember reading this section and just longing to know more about her. It's just such a great chapter, and does such a good job as an intro to Cherise's character. This right here is what made me want to read more!

I was beyond ecstatic when I seen that you'd updated! As usual, the chapter pulled at my heart. The subject of death has stayed so prevalent, which has kept me entranced in this particular fiction. Hopes and prayers that you'll update soon! Your writing is just magnificent!

You crushed my heart from Chapter One... I'll only be getting about two hours of sleep, but it was worth it. Can't wait for your next chapter!

This chapter was absolutely amazing! Too many emotions, I don't think I can adequately describe my reactions to it. But it was absolutely incredible!

This was amazing! I absolutely loved it! I'm terrible at reviews, but I loved every bit of it. Archie and Marco interacting, especially the Captain America references, were great, and it was really sweet how Archie ended up sleeping next to Cherise. Thank you for this wonderful chapter!

Profound and deep.

Wow, this chapter was great. I can't wait to read more.

I hope Cherise forgives Archie soon. Also, are you going to include the mine incident soon? I can't wait to see what you do with that. This story is very well written, and Cherise is a fully developed character. You are doing a great job, and I can't wait to read more.

Awe...Archie and Cherise are so adorable! Especially in this chapter when I finally get to see Cherise letting some of her guard down.

What a beautiful chapter! Absolutely touching and heart-felt, really makes me think about how unfair life can be. I also enjoy Cherise's dual nature, makes her all the more interesting!

So Cherise's double identity is revealed at last! I knew it had to be some sort of fairy with reference to Cherise joining the church. I'm really enjoying this fic, it's so tragic and yet so cutesy and magical all at the same time!