"You forget that I've met the kid. He doesn't need to learn to speed up. He needs someone to teach him how to slow down."
- oohhh, excellent point. Great voice for Dick, and the line abt Dick lounging abt and Wally sarcastically thinking he would buy the entire block was really funny :D

please continue!

what. happened. next! update

This is a really good chapter! When are you going to write the next ones? And, also, you should totally have Bart Point of view in there more often, too. So hurry up with the next chapter, please! It is so not like I am getting any younger over here!

I love this story! It's really good and Ican't wait till you update! Please do so as soon as possible:)

I like this plot.

Awesome! Wasnt expecting the hero kidnap. Update soon :)

I'm loving this so far; I'm looking forward to more. :D

This is an awesome story. I hope you update soon.

Here gnome, sit, yea thats a goid boy gnome, heres some pizza for you, good story. No down gnome let go of my leg.

The update totally made my day...(wow I'm boring)

I can totally see something like this happening.
Anyway, I kind of really want to know what's going to happen next.
I hope they get the chance to make amends and that they both come out of this unscathed, but something tells me that might be wishful thinking haha.

Great job, looking forward to your next up date! :D

haha :) great chapter, update soon!

Man! I want to know what's going to happen!
:)

You are amazing.
This story is amazing.
I really don't know how to describe it. This is just simply amazing. Better. Yeah, probably like one of my favourite FF's, which is saying something.
But yeah oh my god thank you for updating! Can't wait for more! (Andohmygod poor Wally ...)

How 'bout them apples? VERY nice! I like the idea of Wally wanting to return to the hero's life, even when he doesn't want to. Because he was SO AMAZING in Bloodlines! And whoo-hoo! Go Utah!