I love this fan fiction it has a really good story line however the ending isn't very good

i love this story soo well writen

I love it. I don't hate you, I've seen ends more rust. XD

i love this story

The story is amazing but maybe u can do a separate story for the epilogue. It's just am idea.;)

-_- the ending!

No it ended very well... would be very proud from a author to another i am amazed. Thank you for writing a wonderful book.

O-M-G that is so awkward! i have a guy friend like Gale and if he saw me loving on a guy that he thinks is a creep he would freak! Anyway i love it!

its okay. i actually liked how you ended it. luv the story

Naah! It's okay man!

amazing story

dafuq? wow, that was a bit...abrupt.
maybe you could talk about how katniss grows stronger through peeta's love, and how she gats back at those girls. you could also add in what happened to gale hawthorne, seeing as that is still a mystery. Maybe you could explain something in Prim's POV, about why she found out why her mom never abuses her.

you could do sooo many things.
i hope this review helps. your story was great, and it was a shame you had to end it like this.

reaper

finally! a mother peeta deserves

it makes me sad that you made mrs everdeen swap attributes with the 'witch'
im willing to give this fanfic a chance though
its sounds really good so far

LEGASP IT'S OVER...NOOOOO sigh...I'll miss this D: lol it had a good run...