Reviews for Heiress Apparent
Aster chapter 5 . 4/3
I really love this plot! It is well thought out, and very exciting to read! I know it has been quite a while, but perhaps you could find interest in continuing this story. I also had a couple of small questions. Do house-elves name their children like most sentient beings? I was just a bit curious. Would it be normal for house-elves to have "human/muggle" names? Feel no need to respond!
lovelylexi.3483 chapter 5 . 10/16/2019
Love the story so far and I'm looking forward to a new chapter to read soon. You are a talented writer and very creative.
Dragonman110 chapter 5 . 10/6/2019
Update please,
Bellerose chapter 5 . 6/25/2019
Please update. By that I mean update ASAP.
Animemangalover24 chapter 5 . 11/17/2018
When are you going to update this story?
skyeza chapter 5 . 7/27/2018
This was so freaking awesome, i loved it. Brilliant story, i truly enjoyed it and hope you complete it.
zoejaneh101 chapter 5 . 2/16/2018
Great story! Im enjoying this very much. Please update soon if your continuing this.
harmony1994 chapter 5 . 12/8/2017
Love the story so far will you be updating any more?
kmacarthur2104 chapter 5 . 10/13/2017
Are u making more chapters for this book please let me know if you are doing more
christopherrhaydon chapter 5 . 8/1/2017
Please update ASAP, awesome work on the story.
silvershadowseeker chapter 5 . 5/23/2017
you have an interesting story going I would love if you write more
Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2017
WTH WERE ARE THE OTHER CHAPTERS PLEASE MAKE MORE SOON thanks bye
Guest chapter 4 . 1/7/2017
"My name is not Harry James Potter. My full legal name is Jadelyn Catalina Merlina Le Fay Peverell Slytherin d'Medici Pedran."

After enduring three chapters of plotless wonder, that's where I stopped reading.

There's no legitimate reason given for Harry to transform into a spoiled Mary Sue OC, and I barely suspended my disbelief over the obscene inheritance she received in the first chapter ($200 billion? Four shops? Two Quidditch teams?). But after four chapters of canon being chucked out the window I've thrown in the towel.
Splodge2209 chapter 5 . 11/7/2016
Please update soon. This is really good and I can't wait to read more.
XxFanFicObsessedxX chapter 5 . 9/28/2016
UPDATE SOON!
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