I'm rooting for you Masamune, go get meimei!

Not to be rude or anything but I have seriously read better and this is by far in my top 10 Worst Fanfics Ever! Actually in my top 5. But keep trying. Mine are way better and more 84

Really cute :)

Is it ok if I make an insain crossover version of this

I saw this more of a humor story than a romance,'cause this was funny!I love the part when Kyoya threatened to punch Ryuga in the face.

that was random but really cute! they all fight over the girls!XD

OMG GREAT FANFIC! I LOVE THE WELLS AND JULIAN PART! XDDDD THAT WAS SOOOO FUNNNYY!

haha that was cool, if you do a second chapter you can use mi-ki, sorry i wasen't online to give you permition

-clicks add to favourites continuously-

So sweet Madoka and Gingka... -smooching sounds in the background- And Casey and Tsubasa, I love them (Yes, i read Casey's appearance on your profile). Were the females, like, spying on the boys or something? xD

I like your stories somehow (Even though I rant on and on about your grammar and spelling and stuff in my head).

Now where are the authors that made the OCs like Rin and stuff... I gotta hunt them down and ask them how their OCs got into your story -snickers-

Lol. Amazing! Everyone is fighting over a girl! How could you not like that? :P

Okay, these are my thoughts on some of the pairings.

Diva x Zeo HELL YES X3 She was perfect!

Celeste x Damian Crack couple! Bahahaha this is funny to think of! It can be possible...I'll play around with it (though in Cosmic Love, she likes Nile)

Celeste x Zack Pretty cute to think of. This is possible, I think I like it

Nile X Rin HELL YES X3

DAWWWW! How cute!

Mei-mei is one LUCKY LADY.

Madoka and Gingka, such an obvious pairing.

Oh, you included Rin! So sweet!

It was nice, Fan! (Hehehe, Damian getting jealous was my fav. part!)

PFFFFTTTT WHY! WHY YOU DO THIS TO ME, FAN!

Lemme come back when I'm not so hyper on soda and can reply easier.

*a nice walk around my house later*

One problem I have with this, even if it is a one-shot, is that it relies heavily on dialogue. I tend to do that as well, but it's not something you should make a habit of.

(Whhhhhyyyy did you add Rin X Nile. Celeste likes him toooo I feel so happy and guility at the same tiiime!)

I love you for adding Rin, and keeping her stutter and her nervousness. I loved that short little moment that I'm on the edge of whether or not to draw it.

Diva and Zeoo Adorables (So many guys, not enough girls.)

All in all, it was a nice, fast read that I liked. There are a lot of grammar mistakes, and was nice even though you're not big on romance.

Crack pairings. EVERYWHERE :DD Okay not everywhere. (Celeste X Zack, hopefully Nami dones't kill me for at least thinking it'd be cute XDD)

Thank you for adding Rin again!