You write pretty well.I give this a D for Dang.

Please, dear god. Write the next chapter. I will love you forever.

oh good heavens *swoon*

Merlin!

Wow this story was outstandingly hot!how about a sequel with Sevrus and Sirius double Penetrating Remus?

I faved this and wasnt going to review (because its inconvenient to do on my kindle and Im lazy) but then it kept eating away at me and I heard that voice wispering to me so here i am to inform you that this was amazingly sizzly sexily hot as all get out. Everything about this story was perfection! My favorite thing about it, aside from me wanting to hump my reading device of course, was how the porn was hot but there was more going on and you really FEEL it without it being a distracting side story. The dynamics between them were done beautifully! True story. I'm off to read more of your work :)

this wass absolutely amazing and HOT!*fans self* I love moony Sandwich ;)