| Reviews for Will She Sink or Swim? |
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Guest chapter 5 . 10/12/2013 Please write more it is wonderful |
cheyowl chapter 5 . 8/19/2013 Holy crap I need you to pick this story back up! |
Guest chapter 5 . 3/21/2013 Moar! |
lizziemaya123 chapter 4 . 11/2/2012 333333333333333333333333 ohhhh gosh i need moar of this story! :D |
lizziemaya123 chapter 5 . 11/1/2012 make moar! :D it's veryyyyy good btw! i'm addicted! |
Who're youa cop chapter 5 . 8/14/2012 Lawl. This is hilarious First of all, throughout this whole thing, Phil and Dan seemed like they switched personalities. All that Sophie girl, she didn't seem at all like a sister to Dan. Except in the beginning, liked the beginning. The cutting thing? Hmmm, can't say I approve. Most people don't like it when you add in stuff like that, its kinda a bit too teenagery. Sorry, but I get enough of that on the internet already. XD I like your pacing, it did get a little rushed at some points (Like the moving and the cutting bits) but it was overall good. You need to remember to stay way from the teenagery things and, if you can, making the people in your stories less OOC. Which may be hard at first, but its worth it,trust me. This is the part where I get mean, because this bothers me. Just know its not directed at you... STOP MAKING YOUR OCS FALL IN LOVE WITH CHARACTERS THAT ALREADY EXIST. IT WILL NEVER HAPPEN, I'M SORRY. |
JonahBayer chapter 5 . 8/12/2012 Gahhhhhh soo amazing! more please! i havent really read any amazingphil fanfiction, as i prefer dan, but idk this story may just be changing my mind. love it. |
BananaPuddingIsMyFriend chapter 5 . 8/11/2012 Please, please, pleeeaaassseeee write more soon! :D |
OH MY GOLDEEN chapter 5 . 8/4/2012 Oh & by the way. Phil is fucking sexy. Thanks for writing about him! ... Not that Dan isn't... it's just that I find Phil more attractive. |
OH MY GOLDEEN chapter 5 . 8/4/2012 Update. Like, now. |
Nicotomatohead chapter 5 . 7/19/2012 I usually dont like these TGTBT stories, but this is really good and wonderfully written! Would love to read more! 3 |
WolfRain001 chapter 5 . 7/19/2012 Loving it _ |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012 I love this! :) write more soon plz ;) |
MaddieIsAFish chapter 5 . 7/15/2012 Holy mother of all that is adorable, I love this! You seriously need to come out with another chapter soon xD This is amazing c: |
Luvssmarties chapter 5 . 7/11/2012 Absolutely love this! Brilliant! Please right more? I asked nicely? |