Reviews for Will She Sink or Swim?
Guest chapter 5 . 10/12/2013
Please write more it is wonderful
cheyowl chapter 5 . 8/19/2013
Holy crap I need you to pick this story back up!
Guest chapter 5 . 3/21/2013
Moar!
lizziemaya123 chapter 4 . 11/2/2012
333333333333333333333333 ohhhh gosh i need moar of this story! :D
lizziemaya123 chapter 5 . 11/1/2012
make moar! :D it's veryyyyy good btw! i'm addicted!
Who're youa cop chapter 5 . 8/14/2012
Lawl. This is hilarious
First of all, throughout this whole thing, Phil and Dan seemed like they switched personalities. All that Sophie girl, she didn't seem at all like a sister to Dan. Except in the beginning, liked the beginning. The cutting thing? Hmmm, can't say I approve. Most people don't like it when you add in stuff like that, its kinda a bit too teenagery. Sorry, but I get enough of that on the internet already. XD
I like your pacing, it did get a little rushed at some points (Like the moving and the cutting bits) but it was overall good. You need to remember to stay way from the teenagery things and, if you can, making the people in your stories less OOC. Which may be hard at first, but its worth it,trust me.
This is the part where I get mean, because this bothers me. Just know its not directed at you...
STOP MAKING YOUR OCS FALL IN LOVE WITH CHARACTERS THAT ALREADY EXIST. IT WILL NEVER HAPPEN, I'M SORRY.
JonahBayer chapter 5 . 8/12/2012
Gahhhhhh soo amazing! more please! i havent really read any amazingphil fanfiction, as i prefer dan, but idk this story may just be changing my mind. love it.
BananaPuddingIsMyFriend chapter 5 . 8/11/2012
Please, please, pleeeaaassseeee write more soon! :D
OH MY GOLDEEN chapter 5 . 8/4/2012
Oh & by the way. Phil is fucking sexy. Thanks for writing about him! ... Not that Dan isn't... it's just that I find Phil more attractive.
OH MY GOLDEEN chapter 5 . 8/4/2012
Update. Like, now.
Nicotomatohead chapter 5 . 7/19/2012
I usually dont like these TGTBT stories, but this is really good and wonderfully written! Would love to read more! 3
WolfRain001 chapter 5 . 7/19/2012
Loving it _
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I love this! :) write more soon plz ;)
MaddieIsAFish chapter 5 . 7/15/2012
Holy mother of all that is adorable, I love this! You seriously need to come out with another chapter soon xD This is amazing c:
Luvssmarties chapter 5 . 7/11/2012
Absolutely love this! Brilliant! Please right more? I asked nicely?
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