Reviews for Fourth Of July |
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GHIM chapter 18 . 2/26 Reviewing for more! I know it's been years, but these are great! Suggestions...wjop cream link, drive in movie in Tony's garage, or Tony has a PTSD moment after the shrapnel and ARC are removed because he wakes up and there is no blue chest night light in his chest Steve provides comfort... |
GHIM chapter 15 . 2/22 Great sex and it left me laughing! |
wallcoct14 chapter 7 . 5/16/2015 Awsome |
lecrioxss chapter 18 . 5/10/2015 I wish you would keep writing these. Only 3 more to go! The people need shameless smut! 3 |
Guest chapter 15 . 7/29/2014 I am such a total perv, but I love this. It's also super funny... And just, wow. Mega fondue. Hehe :) |
POPTART chapter 9 . 7/28/2014 You are freaking awesome. Period. |
Lousia Rose chapter 18 . 12/14/2013 Jarvis creating a body and his has a very reproductive stamina and craving for certain things wink wink. And Steve and Stark are his pets. And he is their Master. Just an idea. |
Booker10 chapter 18 . 12/12/2013 Love it!:DDD |
Kittyeb chapter 1 . 7/21/2013 Why..why did this fic die with the Apocalypse? |
Guest chapter 18 . 5/3/2013 This will never update again V_V |
Bumblewyn chapter 12 . 4/11/2013 I like it but I wish you'd be a little less... 'original' in referring to them. "Flamboyant brunette" is really a bit over the top, and kind of off-putting in a sex scene? Minimise referring to them by their hair colours in general, please? :)) |
Can'twaitformore chapter 2 . 3/29/2013 Ahhh! I can't wait for updates! And I'm hoping that maybe there are more than 21 chapters? |
Fyncival chapter 17 . 3/15/2013 I was waiting for this! I love this threesome just as much as SuperHusbands or ScienceBoyfriends! You did pretty well on this one! |
tft4 chapter 18 . 3/5/2013 Awesome story. Update soon! |
Guest chapter 4 . 2/8/2013 Lol! I love how you manage to add so much humor! |