It took me a few seconds to get the title- too used to the correct spelling- but when I did, I just couldn't hold in the laughter!

And the Doctor said he doesn't do domestics! ;) Another job well done on your part!

This is amazing. Needs backstory though don't know if there's one and I didn't read it though. This is exactly how they all react too.)

I loved the relationship between Amy and Henry. So cute :) This was wonderful, and I hope to see more stories in this verse from you in the future! Know that you have a faithful reader in this series! :D

Awesome. I’m loving how it was all about Amy and River. :) Also, Gus looking to Alan for help and then Alan giving Shawn a gun and telling him not to shoot anyone he’s not supposed to was brilliant! :D

And Shawn’s internal monologue about ice cream at the end? Priceless!

LOL. Yep, Henry’s been worried about Shawn since he was three and started eating his own toenails. :)

Loved the nap bit. :D

And so sad, all the goodbyes. Great job with Gus saying that Shawn will just be another story someday. Kind of made me think of the conversation between Rose and Doc in 2x4.

You do a great job with the difficult task of introducing many characters and not only keeping them in character, but amusing and fun to read as well. Lassiter and Jack’s interaction was priceless. :)

AWESOME STORY! I really, really, really love this series and I can't wait for the next installment! I just know that Shawn has to go on another trip with either Alan or the Doctor! Looking forward to the next story!

I really love this whole series! This story is fantastic! I hope you continue with another story after this is done because I can totally see Shawn traveling with the Doctor!

Excelent story! Hope that Shawn gets to go on another trip with the Doctor! I think they make a great team!

And now, so do I! Yum Yum!

Ok I was going to wait until I had read all the way thru but I just had to commend you on the dialogue! The witty banter, the way the characters relate to one another...it is amazing that you are able to forge characters from several shows together to get this wonderful tale!

Fun story! Enjoying this series enormously.

Ya a new story!