Dude this chapter is amazing! You are an inspiration in writing.

WOW... I mean, I’ve read a lot of fan fiction stories from different fandoms, and it’s rare to find stories like this - it is amazing! You have such a great writing style and did s wonderful job with each character’s personalities and relationships between them. I really loved Loki’s character (evil yet calculating - a great bad guy) - and Barton was fantastic - and Tony was spot on - and Natasha was perfect... loved Dr Ann too! It is like watching a movie but being able to read the characters thoughts. You write very descriptive and I can totally visualize every fight scene and see every battle wound! Amazing job! Thanks so much for writing - it kept me hooked for days! I’ll def be re-reading this again!

Do these idiots blame anyone else that were controlled by Loki or is it just Clint? He may have been the senior agent, but he wasn't alone!

Ann Deluca is tough, but everyone reaches their breaking point eventually.

You'll heal. Just be patient...That means resting, Barton!

Plus points for your medical knowledge! Not many writers can get a scene written like that.

Help is on the way, Clint.

CLINT!

Yes! I knew he didn't die, Jarvis! Clint lives!

Clint is not dead, Jarvis. Your sensors are faulty.

( ( ( Tony ) ) )

I was afraid that only Clint could see and hear Loki. I'm glad the team heard the conversation.

( ( ( Clint ) ) )

Good fight, Clint. Now, who's watching the aliens?

I love reading your description of Clint's acrobatics!

Well, at least Clint doesn't have to go anywhere.