Quuuuuite interesting! I've really enjoyed the abstractions you create in your writing. It feels "greater than" in a sense. It invokes that kind of sense.

In any case, I'm definitely interested in more - specifically to see if/how Archer fits in all this.

Looks like our boi managed to create a paradox. Does this imply he's freed from being a Counter Guardian? Looking forward to more.

For me ,this is an excellent story . This Story has a scale and grandeur to it , that I think many fanfics lack

Too incoherent to enjoy, 4/10

This is some trippy fucking shit holy fuck

what the fuck am i reading

I can’t say I understand what’s happening but I am enjoying the story very much! I’m glad to know you’ll be continuing it! Thanks for the fic 3

Ultimately I have an inkling whats going on, but on the other hand I have no idea whats going on.

Somehow EMIYA is instigating a war to end all wars, and thus ending his own existence.

In the background Shakespear is laying the foundation for changing the outcome of EMIYA's desires.

And while all of that is happening, all I am left wondering is if there will be any hope for love with Arturia and Shirou?

LOL

So I just found this today, and read it all in one sitting. Am I confused? Yes
Am I eagerly awaiting more? HELL YES!

I don’t know the drama involved in making this, but all I can say is, this story is amazing, and I look forward to reading more!

Stay motivated, and thank you for the read so far!

great

oH great! More giglamesh bullshit.

Fucking hell, did this really have to be in itallics?

Got to say welcome back. I can honestly say screw canon this is great. It has a maddening mix of too much detail but feels like it isnt enough. How you cobbled this together i will never know but still bravo.

I can also honestly say this story is what introduced me to FSN as a series while I was randomly browsing someones profile favs. Thank you for that.

Please keep doing you with this story.

I had this feeling that I'd be seeing this again soon. I'm glad I was right!

I think this is one of the most active chapters so far, if I remember correctly (it's been a while, dood). That makes sense; you're moving away from setting up the grand background of the scenario, and moving towards the actual events to take place.
...That's an observation.

Your prose is sophisticated. (you write gud)
I remember not understanding much of it when I first read this three or four years ago, when I was fifteen or sixteen, but I know I was able to... parse it. That is, I knew the flow, and I wasn't really lost.
Now I understand it much better, if my comprehension of this chapter is anything to go by... but maybe that's just because this chapter is less abstract overall. Damn.
Only one way to find out.
(...The first chapter to predominately feature Shakespeare has been the most comprehensible. That's hilarious.)

Shakespeare seems pretty chill. I like him.
Also, the meta interference gave me a serious erection. Hot damn. That's sexy.

(If I'm reading this right, Shakespeare caused the disconnect from Akasha after he had already described it as something that was there. ...I'm almost certain that's not the only paradox present here, but it's an obvious one.)

Is it this June, or next June? Or maybe last June? I hope it's last June.
XD

Prereading... On one hand, I'm totally interested. On the other hand, most of my knowledge of the Nasuverse comes from either F/SN or loremasters (on SB and SV, not BL) citing source materials to prove a point.
Basically, I'd be pretty useless.

I am hyped.
-droffatsstafford

Its always nice to see you back. By the way, I was playing this new game called "Cultist Simulator" and they have a really interesting story too! (though not everyone likes the gameplay). I hope you can check it out some time.

It's back baby.