I don't believe this to be the end of the story... what happens next? Btw, very nice smutty scene xD I really am liking your story, any chance you will keep working on it? Hope so x)

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This made my mind get filled wih dirty thoughts...can't say that no ones ever perverted well only Luffy, sadly?
You're bad at writing perverted stuff u say...this cheaply did make me blush though…all. Ecause of my creepy fangirlidness...
Keep writing!

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ACEEEE, he's so kawaii, even if I love Luffy...I'm a weird fangirl, dunno, but loving this story...
Although Ace is probably mostly OOC, but I still luv the story :)

I think you did an awesome job so far! I hope you write more soon!

Love this story please update.

I'm just writing this review cause I want the next chapter soon.

This is just a guess, but is Luffy somehow the one who saved Sanji?

I love how you made Sanji so innocent! I hope you'll continue it like that! This story is also similar to those stories where traveling companions go everywhere and their bonds strenghen to the point where the companions would risk their life for one another.

I loved that joke where Sanji tried to use grass to disguise the lord and used that to insult Zoro! Though Zoro is a bit occ. Making him a little meaner would do the trick. Like them fighting over little things.

I like the way they have met. It's funny. I hope their relationship is meaningful.

So loving this story! Please release your next chapter soon! _

Nami stole it! :P I cant wait till they meet luffy. If hes gonna be there its gonna be awesome.

And yah after i train my self hard enough, I might be santoryuu master. :P Anyways thanks for the fast update. Waiting for zoro x sanji smut, not a big ace x sanji fan. :)

Thios chapter is so funny and I loved it, keep up the gd work

This story is both awesome and outpost best, keep up the gd work.