Its been years but I still come back to this to, well, come.

Even if its stressed that Edward is older mentally, this story still is highly inappropriate due to he's only 10 years old. He's just a kid. In my opinion absolutely no sexual/mature content should be occurring for him at the age. I will admit I tried to report this because its just too creepy to me, but I don't think the report was ever able to go through.
Please consider changing Edward's age to an appropriate/mature one.

Maybe I'm wrong but the mature content for Edward seems (in my opinion) not appropriate for how he appears . He may be a vampire and he's mind is supposed to be mature but his body still that of a boy. It was just too unsettling to me.

You have a unique story idea but maybe anything of sexual nature should have waited until he was mature in both mind and body.

ARe you going to finish this story?

Please continue

Yeah...I’m never picking ‘dare’ in Truth or Dare anymore...

Please continue. I'll re-read it every year to refresh my memory when you update

OMG, please tell me our going to finish this story.
I am in luv with it.
Very unusual...for a change.
Not the run of the mill story...& I LIKE IT.

Please let me know when you plan to post more.
I can hardly wait.

Jamie Crabtree ((Messenger)

To update just to post a lemons is not an update. Peace Out

Really different. Language[[yes I know English your first language] /grammar problems, and still a very good start. Also sad to see you never completed it. Won't read but a couple more chapters because I don't read incomplete fics.

Look if you don't like this story which I do like don't post under a fake account if you can't own it and give constructive criticism in what should be a fun place don't talk shit. This is not her job she is not obligated to write it's someone put their own efforts and time into.

Wish u would finish your story! It's smoking hot!

Hello! I just read this whole story and I love it! For the authors note at the beginning of the story, you said that you updated once a year. I am not trying to be rude, but actually would rather see another chapter posted. In two months your year will be up. I am truly excited to read what comes next! Please write. From, a loyal reader.

Loved it I actually masterbated to this.

This is amusing, in a strange way.