I WAS SO TENSE DURING THE LAST CHAPTER I think I actually started screaming (softly) during the end...first with pain and horror, then abject relief. I'm so glad Garrus didn't pull a "break-up for your own good" bull, they are way too perfect together and deserve better than that.

You had me there for a second. I'm glad you strayed from the prompt to make it a happy ending, because I couldn't handle the angst, either.

You did great. Dream sequence almost had me crying.

The last chapter scared the s*** out of me . I was freaking out while reading. Lol So happy it was just him imagining the future.

Your little dream sequence broke my heart. Damn.

This is so perfect! I love the description of the place, the characterization of the characters, the suspense, the fuckin angst and of course the wonderful end!

This was perfect. Amazing story. Thank you.

I loved the passage of time and seeing where everything would have been different had they been apart. It was a great story and just pulled on the heartstrings in the nicest way.

It's great, thank you for writing.

I love the action, and I love the way you describe him coming to turn with his feelings for her. Powerful stuff that's so well written.

Another epic chapter. It's an art to take dialogue and make it flow so well throughout an action sequence. I was never bored, never found wanting.

I love the fact you take a character like Jack into something like that to call them on their bullshit.

A great scene that transitions so seamlessly. It was funny and witty with Jack and became so much more with Thane. It was always a personal dilemma for me in choosing between the two, and this just highlights some of that pain.

Archangel and Siha... perfect.

Hell of a way to grab interest and make me look forward to the next chapter. you do a great job of showing how the relationship is evolving for garrus over the time and that it's more intricate than just a random one time fling.

I don't know how to tell you how much I loved this fic. Maybe I could throw all those heartfelt feels into the monitor and hope they safely get to you.
"even if she's a sun going nova, he'll always have her six." It was such a simple line but it tied the whole fic together. Commence mission stalk author.

Yes yes yes yes yes. Yes. And one more yes. Perfect.

I loved this, and it mostly had me grinning like a bastard, but then...ouch! I thought it had gone horribly wrong! This is not a bad thing by the way, just a bit unexpected. So glad it turned out alright in the end though. I like it when the hopeless romantic wins too. :)

Jack is just great! So funny and arch. I can hear her clear as a bell. I'm also very fond of Thane but I can't read much Thane-fic. It tends to get too angsty and melodrama for me. I was so pleased you made him rather naughty and wry.

Thanks so much!