You capture Orielle's gentleness and truthfulness very well. Also I heartily approve of Pipit/Karane.

Yay! I really like this, and can see Orielle as a terrible liar... :P

There should be a linkxorielle paring.

I thought I was the only one who thought Pippit and Orielle should be together! Finally, someone who feels the same way. I really enjoyed your story! Keep writing, yeah? :)

I thought I was the only one who thought Pippit and Orielle should be together! Finally, someone who feels the same way. I really enjoyed your story! Keep writing, yeah? :)