Beautiful story. The last line though:D

Helloooo

I really like the last line - it says everything yet nothing at all. Beautiful.

Your sister directed me here :D

Hmmm.. It's good.

I like the story plot .. Very nice.. And soothing too.. Lol

Thank you very much for writing ! :)

So sad!

I loved it. Will there be more? I DEMAND MORE. :)

Now, I normally don't like reviewing on my iPod, but I just had to! This was written so beautifully! I love it! I can't wait to read what's next!