THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL AND I LOVE IT BUT DAMN I HOPED YOU'D CHANGE THE ENDING
C'MOOOOOON
WHY CAN'T WE HAVE NICE THINGS FOR ONCE

...I know, I know.

But really - this story is amazing :)

Keep writing, dearie! :D

hervissa :)

Oh, I knew you'd write the dance chapter well, but this was better than I've imagined.

...and of course that Reggie is too busy.
*sigh*
GUUURL, YOU GOTTA TAKE SOME TIME FOR YOURSELF

I love Rumbelle dances.
My favourite being the two of them dancing to the tune of "Sway", with Jefferson singing [because he DOES have a similar voice to Michael Buble ;]].

BUT I LOVE THIS
A LOT
IT'S BEAUTIFUL
And pleeeesae, let this end well.
I NEED SOME FLUFFY ROMANCE
:D

hervisssa :)

One thing - I don't know if this was written before or after we met Hook, but I just imagined the classic Disney one and now I can't stop laughing :D

Also, Rumple's sweet.
Aww.

hervisssa :)

HOW DID I NEVER THINK ABOUT THE POSSIBILITY THAT ARTHUR MIGHT BE A ROOSTER?
*sigh*

Gaston is a jeeerk, Gaston is a jeerk...
TURN HIM INTO A ROSE, RUMPLE
[strange how terrifying can such a simple and innocent sentence be]

Ehehehe :D

And RUmple helping with the dishes is kind of sweet.

hervisssa :)

Both of them have depressing thoughts and both of them need a hug.

IT WOULD MAKE EVERYTHING BETTER

hervissa :)

Heat rising indeed... :D

Oh, Rumple has many tales, about faraway lands, about kings and queens...and about fathers and sons.

But it'll take some time before he's confident enough to tell her that.

hervisssa :)

Oh, Rumple...daydreams already? ;)

Wonderful, truly wonderful :3

hervissa :)

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww :3

Not only a Rumbelle dance, but a Rumbelle vow of trust ALL IN ONE CHAPTER?
Last time I checked, Christmas wasn't until December... ;)

Beautiful chapter :)

hervisssa :)

Realistic Rumple is a great kind of Rumple.

...and God, what kind of a woman [as in, an average 'peasant' woman] would have the balls to try and please the Dark One?
[Okay, my brain presented an answer 'How about Marian?' and I don't really want to go there. Eheheheheheh xD ]

Anyway, love the Wonderland thing.

hervissa :)

The phrase "respectable Disney princess" got me laughing reallllly hard, because basically every princess in OUAT is somehow slipping away from the standarts.
Eheheheh.

But it's a great chapter.
And books are the best gift Rumple could think of :3

hervissa :)

Oh, it's the perfect timing, don't worry :D

I love to read about Rumple's reaction to The Fall, because it's the first moment he actually feels butterflies in his stomach, even though he might not realize it.

Beautiful chapter :3

hervisssa :)

They're like kids sometimes, really.

But hey, all couples are ;)

Great chapter!
...and Rumple was already in Belle's bed! Yaaaay! :D

hervissa :)

...and Maleficent won't even know that the egg was the favor.
Mwhahhahahhh.

OH RUMPLE YOU'RE SO BAD

And Belle gives him something similar to silent treatment? Good. He needs to learn that women are more complicated than he thinks.
Or maybe, that in some things, he's not as clever as he'd like to think he is.

hervisssa :)

I don't think Rumple actually thought about what he said.
Mwhahahahhhhhehehhh.

And Gaston is still a jerk, no matter what realm or what story he's in.

hervisssa :)

..I really hope this is gonna be a bit AU-ish, because it would be terrible for them to break up [you know what I mean] after SUCH A GOOD START.

*sigh*

But I really like the chess game. Rumple needs a distraction and Belle deserves a reward for all that cleaning. AND EVERYBODY IS HAPPY :D

hervisssa :)