Perfect... More humanized TFP stories:):):):)

:o Is there gonna be a sequel to this? Really hope she can save Kyle :(

You know, I really think this could work as a TFP spinoff show. It would be quite a bit darker and more serious than the actual thing, but that would be far more of a blessing than a curse. And while I am normally against ending things on a cliffhanger, it sort of works for this show. Knowing that KO still cares about Mary, it's one of the best ways to end this book.

wow thats all i can say is wow

Sad to see this end.

Great job.
Loved it all the way.

That was a very good fanfiction! Is there a chance of a sequel? Either way congrats on finishing this master piece :)

I must applaud you! I have come across quite a few human/TF fanfics but they mostly have been either boring or too OOC. This is an awesome fic and I can't wait to continue to read and find out what happens!

...so that's it? Is there gonna be a sequel, or are we meant to use our imaginations as to what all the stuff about Megatron meant/was going?

Good work though ;)

If this is the last chapter, then will there be a sequel?

INTENSE! Kyle is still in there...and yeah. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh wow! Short but sweet! They don't remember? Oh boy that is cool! I'm loving this even more each update, specially now they are back to being robots XD

At least Mary got out and is safe.
Hopefully Knock Out will keep his end of the deal.
Update soon.

oooooo wow! XD

Yay...they're finally robots again! Can't wait for more! This is really the part where more is fantastic cause we're at the climax! Keep up the awesome work :D

I'm crying right now.

:'-(

Poor Mary.

Update soon!
Please!