I really hope you come back to this one day cause your an amazing writer and I would love to see where this was heading.

I'm really interested in seeing where you take this story. Awful to hear about the loss of your friends, and I hope you're ok and on the mend after that. I understand you not wanting to succumb to this persons harsh demands, especially being so rude and hateful, but there are those of us who care about you and look forward to seeing you write. I love your technique, and can't wait to see you update this fic again soon. Hope all is well x

OMG!
Please update soon!
I really want to know what happens next:)

First of all, I admire you for going through all you've been through, and still being able to slowly heal, and I don't blame you for wanting to wait until you can deal with these things easier to continue writing. Whenever you wish to update, I'll be here to read it :) x

I'm glad that both Bella and Mikayla are free to go. I wish that Bella could take Mikayla with her. Its sick that her parents only want her for the money they'll get when the sue.

Oh no not Adam! I liked him! Freaking Victoria!
I hope she didn't kill Mikayla.

Hope things turn in your favor soon. Don't let the assholes bring you down (review-wise).

I'm so sorry for all the difficulties you've been through and I hope and pray that you feel better soon. You are a wonderful author and you shouldn't allow people like this guest reviewer get to you. They know nothing about you or your life so just ignore them and concentrate and getting better and sorting out your life.

a bientot

(i dont have an account) i luv this story and i hope u start updating soon!

UPDATE 5/7/13 . chapter 4
I WRITE FANFICTION so I MUST NEVER UDATE.

Oh shit bitch, that's actually true about you. I have waited since this chapter came out for the next one, and I had to wait a long time before for this one. So please, fucking update already!

It appalls me that there's such insensitivity in the world today. You set yourself up by posting this little rant online where everyone could see it and then tell you EXACTLY what they think of you and your selfishness. If you didn't want people to criticize you then you should've PMd this disgusting trash. Eryn is my friend, and I don't appreciate your talking to her that way at all. If you'd said that to her face and I'd been there I'd have happily told you where to stick your oppinions. She is an AMAZING writer, but you don't deserve to bask in that AMAZING talent for one more minute. I hope you review her work again using your account where she can block your ass, 'cause I'd be ashamed to let people know that I'm nothing but a bully by posting such abusive slander. This site is for people who love writing to share and read and be ENCOURAGING to their fellow writers, to help them grow into the kind of award winning writers that have transcended time, to share ideas, and nurture the spirit, if you can't do that then you don't need to post work. I could easily report your review to the site managers and get you banned so that you don't do this again to another writer going through a hard time. THINK BEFORE YOU TYPE, BECAUSE YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT SOMEONE MIGHT BE GOING THROUGH THAT'S CAUSING THEM TO DELAY AN UPDATE! I hope and pray that you will think before you post something like that again. If you have anything to say to me please let me spare you the time and say that I am only here to read fanfiction...and that I will report you if you leave me a rant like this. Feel free to PM it if you feel so inclined. If not...I will assume that you're wiser than you were when you posted this, and I will not push the issue. But you'll be pleased to know that Eryn is getting the support she needs from people who love and care about her and miss her writing AWESOMENESS as much as you do, and we will wait patiently until she feels well enough to return to work. I hope you will too.

Luna Chase

Hey , (i am sorry to say i forgot your user name)

i really liked the story until now.
So i hope that you will continue this story some time in the (near ?) future.
EvenThough there are people like the guest you mentioned in your last chapter.
And what happened in your personal life. I offer my condolences, (not that they help you much)
I know how you feel, had it happen to me to, Though not so recently.

I will follow this story and hope for that update one day.

Xoxo obsedian dream.

Oh sweetheart, I can't believe someone said that to you... I wish you the best of luck darling and please don't let one person ruin fanfiction for you completely. On a smaller scale I know what you are going through a really close friend of mine passed away six months ago and you are doing way ether than I was, I just stopped doing anything and sequestered myself away and read fanfiction. I managed to pull my life back together and I know that you can too!

You are fucking awesome for that! I had someone do the same kind of review while my two year old was really sick and they didn't understand that's child comes first. Take all the time you need. The story is fuck awesome BTW!

I am so sorry that people have the nerve to berate you and be abusive about your updates. This seemed like it was going to be a good read. My condolences on the loss of your friends and the ending of your engagement. I hope and pray that your life starts to get better.

I am sorry for your loss. You're in my prayers.