Would be a good movie

Great story

Awsome!
I really enjoyed your story.
It fits perfectly to the characters we all know from the magnificent book(s) of Tolkin.
You made indeed a very good Job!
Thank you for your time and this pice of Middlearth you drew out in this story and which you shared with the readers.
Even if I‘m not originally english speaking (what makes it somethimes hard not to understand but to Commander some storys on this platform in the way i would like it) I tried for you.
I was very pleased of your story and it was a plesure to read!
I like the way you write, for me it was quite fluently and matched the way i guess the characters would speak.
Please accept these few stumbled words of mine, as an attempt to show you my great thanks. ;)

Laurelin Telperion
(Normally found on )

what a wonderful Story!
thanks for sharing

thengel seems to have been a wise man

Excellent

An excellent job. Enjoyed it all greatly. Hope you write more!

I found this literal translation of the Lay of Leithien
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I Lirilla Lehtalëo

I. Sindacollo Lestanóressë.

Aran eänë yáressë
nó Atani vantaner cemenessë
túrerya né ortaina hróto lumbulë,
márya né or tumbo ar taurë.
Lassiva rierya, laiqua collarya
telpië ehtaryar andë ar aicë,
i silmë turmaryassë né mapaina
nó Isil né carna var Anar né ostaina.

Aparéssën, írë i hrestanna
Endoressë Valinórello
i Eldarimbë arwa valanen entullë,
ar tulwi viller ar calmar uryaner,
írë arani Eldamaro lendë ara
arwa tuo ohto, nu i menel
san telpië rombaryar súyanër
írë Anar né nessa ar Isil né vinya.
Palan san Valariandessë
Lestanorëo pelda nóressë,
Aran Sindacollo harnë tirna mahalmassë
lintarmië sarna rondossen:
tanomë hyellemíre, marilla, ar malwa mirilondo,
ar cantaina tinco ve helma lingwion,
turma ar (corslet?), pelecco ar macil,
ar sílala ehter ner panyaina hahtassë:
ilyë sinë haryanéro ar nontero pitya,
an melda ilyë harmar mardessë pella,
ar vanime yeldi Atanion pella,
haryanéro yeldë, Luhtiénë.

Luhtiénëo I Melda

Telqui tyelce ve tane úvar yure ata
i laiqua cemenessë nu Anar;
vendë vanima ve ta úva ëa ata
árallo lómenna, Anarello Ëarenna
Vaimarya né luine ve fanyarë lairessë,
nan sinde ve sinyë ner hendiryat
collarya lanyaina vanimë indilinen,
nan morna ve huinë ner findesserya.
Táleryat ner larcë ve aiwë rámanen,
lalalerya valin ve i tuilë;
i nindë tasarë, i cawala fen,
i lisse-holme lohtala nandava,
i cala lassessen aldaron,
i óma nenwa, sine pella
vanimerya né ar almierya,
alcarya ar melimierya.

Hannon-le for writing this story!

It's finished? *Pouts* Noooooooooooooooo!
GREAT story!

I think this is the best chapter of this story. I especially like how you referenced Aragorn forseeing Boromir's death and how Ecthelion does not know for sure whether Aragorn is the Heir of Elendil. You have show Aragorn, Ecthelion, and Denethor all as good honest men. Many other fics for this period show Denethor being overly nasty and prideful and show Ecthelion ignoring his son. Very Well Done!
Hannon-le!

Lovely job! I truly enjoyed this tale.

Just finished re-reading and enjoying this-thanks for still sharing it!

i really liked the whole story. 2 comments:

- the link for the quenya translation of the lay of luthien can be found at: .

- the realm of celeborn and galadriel is lothlorien. the coty is caras galadhon.

Great story! I want more! :) All you characterization were perfect...a really interesting look at Aragorn's wanderings over the years before his journey with the ring.

I really liked this fic. You've really captured the essence of Middle Earth and these characters and brought to life the ones we hardly know.