This story is so cute . Haha all kid do that . They do something wrong thinking it wonderful and at first you are like. Fuming then they look at you with these innocent little eye all proud and you don't have the heart to shout at them
Haizel

Oh how wonderful, more Weasley charm. I love how you portrayed the brotherly relationships, how Fred and George are just so darn amazing that no one can resist helping them out, even their brothers. I appreciate the difference in the reasons between this chapter and the last one. Fantastic, phenomenal, dazzling- however you put it, this is a great fic.

"Fred and George just stayed firmly in the middle of the mattress, careful not to let their toes dangle off the edge. As everyone knows, that is the safest position to be in when you're in a bedroom at night; it keeps your ankles well out of the way of the jaws of some unseen monster, which might be looking for a taste of human flesh." *sigh* Perfect.
I love the lines you through in, with wit and human emotions and just an all-around family feeling. It's so sweet how Bill gets up for them! My only critique is that Fred and George sound older than 4 years old. Most of the lines fit in fine, but at times their language seems like a 7-year olds. Either way, what a lovely start to the collection. As long as Bill doesn't murder Charlie.

AWWWWW

i love them soo much please update soon

awww i love the twins!

I love twin stories that aren't post DH, and this is a really good one. I don't mean to nit pick, but I'm going to anyways: in your story about Fred and George in their first year they don't know how to pick the lock on Snapes store cupboard, but they can pick the lock on the broom shed 5 years previous. But that's the only thing that was off, the rest of the story is great! It's pretty impressive that you can write the twins as little kids so perfectly when we only get to know the characters as teenagers. I look forward to more chapters(:

God I love those two hehe they are by far my favs along with Remus lol hope there's more to come :D x

Update soon!

Destrier :D x

This is such a cute story. I really wish you would update soon!

Again, aww! :) Please update soon!

Aww! Imagine what Molly and Arthur will think when they see the three siblings in the morning! :)

(The following is a prize review for winning Second Place in The "True Colors" Competition.)

Oh my goodness, this is such a wonderful idea for a story, and you've executed it flawlessly! Your ability to keep such a firm, accurate hold on the Weasleys' personalities is a truly outstanding thing, so kudos to you on that!

Fred and George were simply adorable. You managed to capture that touch of childish innocence so well, and I could practically visualize their fear in my head. As for Bill, well, I can't even tell you how well I think you characterized him. He was the epitome of a big brother in this, and I was chuckling out loud at, "Perhaps you can go back to sleep with them on top of you." That was absolutely classic.

Having him spend the night there was a very sweet touch. I absolutely loved this story. Excellent work.

This is really great! I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Aww, that is so cute. I can just imagine the twins being four year old kids, being scared of the dragon under the bed and all. And that's really so sweet of Bill (shame on charlie though, scaring little children... tsk, tsk, tsk). He was always the dependable brother. You really capture the characters very well. Is it just me or are British people really good writers? XD

This was funny and very Fred and George. I like the idea that they wouldn't like their brooms 'At the ripe old age of six'! This I'd really good and I can't wait for Percy's one