You're using the term monkey way too much!

I really tried to give this story a chance, but the way you are with men in this is horrible. Having men be nothing but cheating sex machines is just as bad as characterizing women as being vapid little children that must have a man make all their decisions for them. I know that you are trying to show flaws in the Kagome/Kouga and Kikyou/Inuyasha relationships, but having Sango actually encouraging Kagome to go back to a man who was hitting her and cheating on her is too much. No real friend will do that. The tone you have taken is that it is perfectly normal and acceptable for men to cheat, and it isn't (besides having the undertone that women DON'T cheat). It isn't. As someone who loves her three brothers AND her three sons, I can't continue reading such misandry.

Plagiarism is a very serious crime.

Please update sooner...I hope inuyasha and kagome end up together.

i dont no why you didnt disclaim the real author of this story ZANE! the book is called "total eclipse of the heart"! (just because you changed the characters names) doesnt mean shit you plagiarized her work! give all credit where it is due ZANE! is an amazing erotic novelist. if you had copied the concept, i could have understood...but you took the novel changed a few words and slapped your name on it... you ripped off her work without disclaiming. SHAME ON YOU. youre lucky this is fanfic, b/c you would have gotten sued for plagiarizing!

continueeee this please i beg you for the love of kami please continue soon i am addicted to this story i mean really i read this in two nights XD and past my curfew than i normally do please dont leave me hanging on thoughts of how it may continue and im hoping a divorce with kikyo would be soon cause she seems to be making hints that she may be cheating on inuyasha love the story and awesome job on everything i have no care of the grammar and normally i would but the story is too damn good that i dont care of it much XD again please continue hopefully i see this soon updated

Please update soon! I can't wait to read what happens next!

Oh wow that was so sad but it shows how good Inuyasha is. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon.

Talk about heartbreaking! You definitely made Inu the perfect man with this one, but its still sad. Wonderful chapter. Cant wait to read what happens next.

Oh no! Please don't let this be the end for them. Update soon.

Awwwwww! Poor Kagome.. Happy that Inuyasha wants to be a faithful husband, but I can't wait for him and Kagome to get together. : ). Great chapter. Update soon!

Ugh I'm like trying not to cry lol I'm happy the route you took with this story because at least Kagome now knows that there really are good men out in the world. Now I'm just waiting for the drama bombs to explode all over the place!

I am snoop happy you updated your story! I absolutely love your story and you are definitely one of my most favorite authors I follow. Since it's been so long since I read this one, I went back to reread it and its even better the second time around reading it. You are very detailed in describing the characters, their actions and feelings. Even the sexual fluff is tasteful and classy that it does not come off as disgusting or raunchy. Please update as soon as you can cuz the suspense is killing me wanting to see what happens next to Inuyasha n Kagome. Not very many authors can write stories that actually make you feel like you are actually seeing or watching what is exactly being described. Im sorry if im rambling on but you are so worth the credit and encouragement. I hope to be able to read more stories too or just keep going with this one lol. Anyways I'm just excited and happy to see this story continuing again...yay :-)

Just read all the chapters to this and I really like this story. Really want to know what is going to happen between these two after that kiss. Sango has a wild outlook on relationships lol. Can't wait for your next update.

Great song. Decent chapter. Too bad their relationship is stuck in the friend zone. Can't wait until they are both brave enough to do what they must (leave their current relationships) and be together. Thanks for sharing and updating!