Did Maddie destroy a clone or duplicate of Danny, or is "her son" a fake?

good!:) Please update!

I like it, I think, but it is a bit... hard to follow. Not in a way that makes it impossible to understand though, just a bit difficult. I do really like it though, and I can't wait to figure out what happens (or happened) if you ever update again.

interesting. i foreshadow that there is character death (homocide or sucide, no so sure of)

Ah... YJS2... It's getting better... but that stupid time skip. WHY, DC, WHY!
Anyway, nice start!

Im confused like it though

I TOTALLY know what you mean about YJ. I mean, S2 just completely changed the feel of the show! I just pretend it ended after S1. In fact, the feel is so different, that I would even call it two different shows, S2 being a spin-off from S1. Ya know?

This is amazing so far!try and make the next chapter longer please!

Oh wow!

The summary really caught my eye.

And the story wasn't disappointing either!

It's amazing! Though I am slightly confused in one part, what happened to the trigger pulling?

Clouds of ominousness?

-Realizes there was a second chapter-

...Well, this is awkward. Same thing as before, only this time I actually realized there was a second chapter. So I'll be stalking for the third then.

This chapter was WAY calmer than the first, a nice break from the intensity of your prologue. xD Nice... yet irritating. I want to know what happened to Danny back there, obviously. So I suppose this is like teasing your readers... Good job!

...Still rereading and trying to process what happened after the linebreak.

...Scanning

...Downloading

...Processing

...DING!

Alright...whoa... Just whoa. Wonder what's happening there. Ghost Invasion? Danny's Secret Exposed? Maddie goes ballistic? All three? Arrrgh, I needs another chapter. Please update this, I'll be waiting... like a stalker. O.O