Reviews for I Couldn't Watch You Die
MythStar Black Dragon chapter 14 . 12/23/2013
Loved it was great you should keep it up
Maria
Kaiana chapter 14 . 11/29/2013
Please update! :D
annabeth27 chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
the begining has way to much detail!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
I love this story keep writing:)
pezjunkie13 chapter 14 . 3/23/2013
I think you've forgotten the universe you created for yourself. This story was really amazing until the last chapter and this. You refer to Katniss as the girl on fire, even though in the universe you've created she should be the invisible girl. In this chapter you have Peeta remembering what it is like to carry sacks of flour, when it is Katniss that works in the bakery.
Call Me Mimzy chapter 15 . 3/22/2013
I hope your update is soon. I really enjoyed reading this fic.
Bluelily710 chapter 15 . 3/22/2013
I love it! Let's get to the love scenes now shall we;) update soon! Great job
ShutterbugMom chapter 15 . 3/22/2013
Woot! I see my name!

No worries, kid. Happens to all of us. There were at least 3 chapters where I forgot to change the names, so it was either sookie and Eric, or Catherine and Vincent.

Cause I'm a derp like that.
ilovethemanofsteel chapter 15 . 3/21/2013
Ha I didn't really notice if care about the goof ups it was still good
ShutterbugMom chapter 14 . 3/21/2013
I love your writing, but chapter 14 has me a little confused. She's the girl on fire again? Did I miss something?

And how does Peeta remember hefting sacks of flour, when it was Katniss that worked at the bakery?

Just thought I would point those things out. I adore this story (even though I JUST found it) and I look forward to new chapters.

Also, meow meow *snort* meow. (Hi from my three cats. #crazycatladyproblems)
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
JABmeagain chapter 14 . 3/20/2013
Can't wait for more!
jc52185 chapter 14 . 3/20/2013
Interesting concept having this be from Peeta's point of view. Interesting switches as well while keeping the main plot points the same.
we'reonfire chapter 14 . 3/19/2013
DAMMIT NO WHYDFNJIDJDKERJKDKEKDKL I HATE YOU OMG WHY DAMMIT NO EVERLARK ERGGGHHHHH
ilovethemanofsteel chapter 14 . 3/19/2013
Interesting choice in saving glimmer!
ilovethemanofsteel chapter 13 . 12/26/2012
Oh my god a katniss compass that's awesome
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