Lol, hahaha! Ending soooooo funny!

A great ending the biter-sweetness leaves a good feeling in the reader i congradulate you

Oh, yeah, I can totally see this as an actual episode. You have everypony in-character and the premise for this story is intriguing. I'm interested to see how Derpy plays into this and whether or not Dinky will be participating.

I really like this ending, it's bittersweet. :)

Your story sucked me in. Excellent job!

I really loved this; it was sad, scary, strangely fulfilling. I thought it was cool you made Derpy one hell of a dodgeball player, sad she fell into such a dark place, but happy that it all ended well

Pretty cool story here. I liked Derpy's background and the references to Disney's Recess.

Keep the good writing.

resume!

Holy jesus, you got me at "Bob".

This was amazing, I loved how you described the dodge-ball scene. I can't help but pity Gilda, hopefully she grows up. Congratulations on a really great story.

SD: A great and satisfactory ending

Great story sad and happy ending Gilda is gone for good. I think alot of soul searching for Gilda who knows when she crosses path with Dash again anytime soon. Wow so much emotions and so much the very best writing i laid my eyes on. I commend you on this incredible story i laughed and cried you done everything perfect i applaud you bravisimo.

8D

It makes me sad and happy it ended. Sad because there will be no more of this story but happy that you can now work on other stories!

Great ending of this really awesome story, however I do wonder if is there going to be either a sequel or an epiloguge chapter? I hope it does